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學生的讚美,加上成績的見証,就是最好的實例
—學生對導師的教學認同,更幫她在考試中大有進步!

我們這位學生是一位上班族💼,平時都非常之忙,沒太多的時間可以上課⏳。但要移民的她一定要達到聼講讀寫4個7的成績。她知道Writing和Speaking都不能單靠自己,所以選了一星期一堂的私人班👥,放工後就過來。經過幾堂的操練📝,她嘗試去考試,當然不能一次就立刻達到最理想的成績,但她已經有了明顯的進步!最重要是學生真心認同導師真的幫到她🤝!每次聽到學生拿到他們的成績很滿意既時候,就是我們教育的最大成就!

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【 James’ Tips🔑】

【 James’ Tips🔑】
Today’s lesson is on the necessity of avoiding fatal mistakes.

The following question and sample was submitted by a candidate who works in IT and needs all band 8.0. Therefore, the feedback given to this candidate who is taking only private lessons, is much more targeted and is needless to say, quite different from the feedback given to a student who would be targeting a 6.0, 6.5, or even a 7.0.

8.0 is the cream of the crop.

The candidate’s performance could have been an easy 7.5 except they made 2 fatal mistakes, which immediately would have made it as low as a 6.5 or even a 6.0. This inaccuracy was augmented with considerable complexity of sentence structure that was somewhat mitigating. Very common mistakes that virtually all of the candidates in Hong Kong make.

What fatal mistakes?

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➡Topic Question:

Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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✅❎James’ comment on the student’s work:
It is not helpful to open the essay with a simple sentence.
The introduction makes a damning mistake, and the result is thus sealed.
Better sign posting or linking has been supplemented which was lacking.
The conclusion has improved upon past performances yet still uses rather common complex sentences.
An alternative that leaves no doubt as to the caliber and band has been suggested for reference.

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【 James’ Tips🔑】

【 James’ Tips🔑】
Today’s tip is on the importance of a strong conclusion.

The following is a typical example of a student whose IELTS target is 7.0 but unfortunately is still performing at 6.0 or less 👀.
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➡Topic Question:

Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared free.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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📝📝Candidate conclusion:

“In conclusion, the admission to access essential information should be open to the whole community, however, vital and dangerous one should be narrowly provided.”
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✅❎James’ comment on the student’s work:
Unnatural lexical item choice, “admission; narrowly provided”. “Community”?
Improper punctuation.
No demonstration of a range of complex sentence structures.
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📝📝The right way, using the same ideas:

“In conclusion, based on humanitarian grounds in order to save lives, vital medical technologies should be shared freely for the benefit of the whole world notwithstanding that any technologies that have a military application which may pose a lethal threat should be safeguarded given their potential for misuse.”
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If you merely do what everybody can do, you will get the mark that everybody can get.
If you want a higher mark that most people do not get, you have to do something better.
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【 James’ Tips🔑】

【 James’ Tips🔑】
“How can I get a high band (7.0) in IELTS?”, many students ask.
Continued from last week, we will be looking at coherence and cohesion of the second body paragraph as well as the conclusion paragraph in addition to correcting some of the more common ‘HK-English’ errors👀.
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➡TASK 2 QUESTION
Some people choose a career according to the social status and salary it will give them. Others choose a career according to whether they will enjoy the work.
Which do you think is the best way to choose a career?
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📝📝The following was submitted by a HK working professional attempting to achieve a 7.0. Can you spot the mistakes?🧐
“By contrast, for those who enjoy the entire nature of their job have a tendency of do a better job in their career. The reason is that for those who enjoy them would also spend more time on the job and would try to comprehend the work more thoroughly. Hence, this will leads to less error being make on the job. Furthermore, the worker will be more fond of the job and makes the work environment more energetic.

Overall, this seem to be advisable to choose career based on their job enjoyment rather then the salary. However, there are situations that individual prioritises those basic needs more, due to varies circumstantial reasons.”
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✅❎James’ comment on the student’s work:
Some adequate linking a plus. Repeated copying of the topic lexicons fails to demonstrate lexical resource. More boilerplate. A lack of a range of sophisticated complex sentence structures is evidenced by the repeated use of “and”. Conjugation issues. Countable versus uncountable nouns issues. Passive voice issues. Arguments are sound but the grammar in both accuracy and more importantly range are rather limited. Basic conjugation of third person singular errors is an automatic 6.0 category mistake, ipso facto. More spelling errors. Note the proper example of a strong complex sentence in the corrections.
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【 James’ Tips🔑】- Part 1

【 James’ Tips🔑】- Part 1
“How can I get a high band (7.0) in IELTS?”, many students ask.
While there are four skills that are assessed, ask anyone who has taken the exam and you will learn that invariably, the most difficult skill assessed is, yes, writing. There are many techniques necessary to achieve this which would be outside the scope of a quick tip, yet as you know, a good start is not only have the task but is also absolutely vital, to giving the examiner a good first impression.

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📘 James’ Tips

“How can I get a high band (7.0) in IELTS?”, many students ask.

While there are four skills that are assessed, ask anyone who has taken the exam and you will learn that invariably, the most difficult skill assessed is, yes, writing. There are many techniques necessary to achieve this which would be outside the scope of a quick tip, yet as you know, a good start is not only have the task but is also absolutely vital, to giving the examiner a good first impression.

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James’ Tips

Today’s tip is on the importance of clear paragraphing.

The following example is by a typical Hong Kong DSE student who is targeting a 6.5 and has at the moment only a 5.0 approximately skill level.

❓ Question:

Many parents feel that competition should be encouraged among children. Others believe that other skills or qualities are more advantageous.

Discuss both these views and provide your own opinion.

📌 Comments:
Parsing issues, ie, patient (adj.) or patience (n.)
Syntax and grammar issues.
Absence of linkers.
The essay is 1 giant block with no clear paragraphing.
The grammar has been corrected and linkers provided.

A better flow and progression of ideas, using only the same ideas in the essay, would have been:

💢 💢 Introduction 💢 💢
Paraphrase the topic; give a clear thesis statement.
️🎉 Body 1:
The benefits and drawbacks of competition.

️🎉Body 2:
Cooperation as a superior alternative.

Conclusion:
Reiterate why competition is not desired and why cooperation is a superior alternative.

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