// James’ Tips //

This week we take a look at yet again, the most persistent HK-Chinglish errors that nearly all of the HK students are making in the IELTS exam. Although there are many mistakes in the following essay, all of which have been corrected, this analysis will focus on 4 of the most critical errors, or headshots, that even one of which will derail a 7.0 attempt.

This sample was written by a HK working professional attempting to get an all 7.0, just like everybody else. Can you spot the 4 mistakes:

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☑️ 1. Single plural incoherence
☑️ 2. parsing, parts of speech incoherent
☑️ 3. 3rd person singular
☑️ 4. spelling errors
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// James’ Tips //

This week we take a look at a more typical example of Hong Kong’s level of English which in fact is already considerably above the mean or local standard.
This essay was written by a HK working professional currently targeting a 7.0, which is rather superfluous to mention really, considering EVERYBODY is targeting all 7.0.

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🔖 REASONABLE RANGE; INCOHERENCE OF PLURALITY; SOUND UNITY; COGENT ARGUMENTS
🔎 Task Achievement check.
🔎 Coherence and Cohesion check.
🔎 Grammatical range suspect and faulty.
🔎 Grammatical accuracy rather atrocious.
🔎 Lexical Resource displays some flexibility albeit jinxed.
Some words very accurate, others not.
🔎 Linking and signposting could be better.

💡 Generally, range is conspicuously lacking notwithstanding some choice lexis, which coupled with the preponderance of incoherence ultimately renders this a rather average performance of 6.0 even though in fact its lexical display is somewhat above average, say strong 6.5 or even 7.0
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How to write an IELTS Writing Task 2 Problem Solution Essay

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More vehicles on the roads these days. Most families now own more than one car
👉 The solution for problem 1
Better infrastructure. Car sharing schemes. Cycle lanes to encourage people to use bicycles instead of cars.

= = 🔖 Problem 2 – Causes 🔖 = =
Public transport is often inconvenient and overcrowded
👉 The solution for problem 2
More frequent and comfortable buses and trains would encourage people to use public transport.

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📘 James’ Tips

This week we take a closer look at a strong candidate who is targeting a 7.0 and is very nearly there.
This week we take a look at a rather strong essay that is attempting a 7.0 which yet unfortunately persists in making one of the most common mistakes so many Hong Kong students are making that derails the attempt.

Can you spot the fatal error?

📌 Comments:
🔖 GENERAL GOOD EXAMPLE OF RANGE WITH UNFORTUNATELY TOO MANY INSTANCES OF SINGULAR PLURAL INCOHERENCE
Task Achievement sound.
Coherence and Cohesion adequate.
Grammatical range extensive. More has been supplemented, see suggestions.

Grammatical accuracy suspect.

Lexical resource displays some flexibility albeit with minor inconsistencies (admittedly, deserved).
Spelling is an issue; singular plural coherence issues persist; one sentence forgot a verb, a serious penalty.

Overall this is very near a 7.0; however, singular plural incoherence is a headshot rendering this most likely to be a 6.5 leaning slightly towards a 7.0 but not quite cigar.
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📌 真實學生 : IELTS Writing 數堂就從 6.5 到 7.5

我地既學生 Rex 本身英文不錯,他需要全7既成績去移民。每次上堂他都表演得很滿意亦經常當面稱贊James,落堂後他都會很高興地表示 James 幫了他很多,教了他很多!

IELTS 考試最大的困難都莫過於 Writing 同 Speaking, Rex只上了幾堂(5堂左右)私人班(每次一小時)就已經有很明顯的進步!但他想達到全8的成績,所以他會繼續努力, 再嘗試多幾次的課堂,待續…

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✈ 出走香港真係咁難?

對於【技術移民】申請者來說,英語要求則是移民中的重要環節。澳洲作為香港移民申請者的首選國家之一,其對於「IELTS雅思」分數也有硬性要求。

IELTS 雅思考試分為兩種類型,學術類 (Academic) 俗稱A類及一般培訓暨移民類 (General Training) 俗稱G類。
(1) 學術類 – A 類:適合前往英語系國家求學者,考試內容有部份偏重學術技巧。
(2) 一般培訓暨移民類 – G類:適合計劃到海外工作或是移民申請者。

有見及此,Elite English 開發了一系列小班制的IELTS精讀課程,根據學生不同的情況分班,針對IELTS考試內的文法運用、生字詞彙、句子組織及段落結構,全面幫助學生短期提升 writing、speaking的技巧並獲取理想成績。

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成 功 個 案 分 享

🔖 IELTS 考極都考不到,跟在香港考有關嗎?
又到左分享的時刻,大家都知道 IELTS test 是全球性的,不論你在哪裏考試只要你拿著它的證書都是世界認可!但相信有不少的你都聽過身邊的朋友爲了拿到目標分數花了不少金錢和時間;有些人更不惜飛去外地嘗試……原因一般都是聼誰呀誰呀的朋友說“。。。當然有些人成功有些人白白浪費了飛行的時間。其實我們一直以來接觸了無數的學生,也聽過他們的經驗,就在此分享一下。👍

️🎉 個案一:有個學生,她是護士,爲了移民一定要拿到Academic paper 的全7,在香港考了好幾次也是差一點點,所以她決定飛去臺灣試一試,碰碰運氣;但最終都是失敗了。

️🎉 個案二:就是最近的一個學生,他在香港考了一次但是還差一點點,二話不説就決定了去澳洲考第二次。這次他真的有一點點的進步,0.5分的提升。但原因是不是正正異地的分別?坦白說,只要你準備充足再加一點點的運氣,又碰到能讓你發揮的題目那就信心十足,考到好成績!不過在此分享多一點,在香港一般考 IELTS 都是在早上進行,直到大概中午。剛剛在澳州完成了 IELTS 的 Mr Sze 說他雖然只進步了0.5分但很感謝被安排了下午才考試,不用那麽趕!

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📌 9 月是最佳的時機準備 2020 年到英國留學!

多所英國頂尖院校將親臨「英國著名大學諮詢日」,學生可一對一與院校代表見面,並查詢該校各學科的收生要求,代表亦會評估學生的入學機會。同場IDP升學顧問更會即場進行升學諮詢,為學生建議合適的院校及科目,更會協助學生申請UCAS(英國大學聯招)。
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