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我地既學生Rex本身英文不錯,他需要全7既成績去移民。每次上堂他都表演得很滿意亦經常當面稱贊James,落堂後他都會很高興地表示 James 幫了他很多,教了他很多!

IELTS 考試最大的困難都莫過於 Writing 同 Speaking, Rex只上了幾堂(5堂左右)私人班(每次一小時)就已經有很明顯的進步!但他想達到全8的成績,所以他會繼續努力, 再嘗試多幾次的課堂,待續…

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🎉 James’ Tips

This week we take a look at a Writing Task 2 written by a Hong Kong working professional targeting a 7.0. There are a number of issues in this sample, including a rather subtle but common issue with many HK students. See if you can spot it:

✅❎James’ comment on the student’s work:
Task achievement check.

Coherence and cohesion adequate.

Examples and arguments sound.

Better paragraphing, or, more careful topic sentence forming, will help. It is not necessary to put examples in a topic sentence, but rather, to articulate the point, followed by in the next sentence, examples, illustrations, analogies, etc. Possibly, since the two examples seemed central, to have them each in their own paragraph, with a paraphrased – not repeated – topic sentence that echoes and supports the thesis.

More effort in paraphrasing will help give a good first impression to the examiner, which of course, requires some lexical resource.
Spelling is essential at 7.0 and above.

A “time out”, is essentially, temporary prison for children, not exactly time away from the classroom, thus slightly awkward.

Some over use of “and” indicates lack of practice and flexibility with complex sentence structures not withstanding at least one solid instance of a complex sentence.

To make an argument, make an argument; not, maybe, make an argument.

Consider as a conclusion closing sentence, rather than “could, should, may, might”:

Demanding that children grow in knowledge and creativity while pigeonholing them is both an antithetical oxymoron, and worse, cruel and inhumane.
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國際英語水平測試 (IELTS) 為 🐨澳洲、🇨🇦 加拿大及 🇨🇦 🇳🇿 新西蘭最常用的移民英語考試,可以助香港人一償前往加國工作或升學的願望。在加拿大,IELTS 是不少學府、專業組織及僱主的首選英語考試,獲當地逾 350 所機構接納及認可為升學或求職的英語能力證明。

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James’ Tips

This week we look at a sample by a Hong Kong working professional currently targeting an all 7.0.

Can you spot the positive and negative objective marking criteria?

  1. Chinglish
    2. prepositions
    3. determiners
    4. singular plural coherence
    5. spelling
    6. third person singular
    7. lexical accuracy
    8. more range
    9. parsing
    10. passive voice

📌 Comments 📌

Ideas trenchant, but no marks are awarded for good ideas; au contraire, it is the grammatical accuracy, grammatical range, and lexical sophistication, and precision, that renders the mark. Just too many errors, which can be overcome with adequate reading immersion and exposure coupled with writing practice.

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【 Elite 分 享 編 – 英國大學排名 2019 】

📌 英國大學排名的數據採納方法

《泰晤士報(Times)》Good University Guide 英國大學排名同時採納學生滿意度、學術研究水平、入學門檻及畢業生就業情況等多方面去評價各所英國大學,能較全面地反映大學的教學和學術研究表現,因此我們亦一直主要採用 Good University Guide 作為挑選大學的數據參考。
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James’ Tips

This week we look at a sample by a HK working professional currently targeting a 7.0.
📒 Can you spot the positive and negative objective marking criteria?
1. DO NOT FORGET THE REFERENCE
2. more linkers
3. singular plural incoherence
4. “and” does not qualify as range
5. more descriptives
6. syntax
7. missing “be” verbs
8. conjugation
9. definite article usage
10. prepositions
📘 Comments
Task Achievement is sound; coherence and cohesion lacking due to failure to reference. Some range is evident. More linkers and descriptives could raise performance. Failure to reference will incur a significant penalty, up to 2.0 TA penalty, per examiner prerogative. Spelling errors, singular plural incoherence, and conjugation errors are not tolerated at the 7.0 level. Finally, whereas task 1 is only 40% of the band, theoretically, in practice, it is 100% of the first impression which will influence interpretation of the task 2, and thus, should be done carefully.
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📚 你需要考哪一種雅思 IELTS?

雅思分為學術類(General Training 以下簡稱 G類)和培訓類(Academic 以下簡稱A類)兩種。那麼辦理那種到底要考那種簽證呢?

🇦🇺 澳洲移民局要求:申請移民需要考G類雅思。如果你是通過工程、IT等專業做獨立技術移民的話就可以考 G 類雅思4 個 7 分或者 4 個 6 分。

🙋 那就會有很多學生會問:為什麼會計的學生申請獨立技術移民就需要考 A 類雅思4個7分呢?

在這裡解釋一下:🖍 會計學生之所以需要考A類雅思4個7分,並不是移民局的要求。而是會計職業評估機構CPA在做會計職業評估時需要雅思A類4個7分。

還有的學生會問:如果考A類雅思可不可以用來申請移民?答案是可以!A類雅思用於G類雅思用途,但是反過來G類雅思不可以用於A類雅思的用途。

而留學簽證則需要A類雅思。因為留學屬於培訓範圍,就必須要考培訓類雅思。根據現在的留學要求,學生只要考到A類雅思5分就可以拿到學生簽證。之後在根據課程的具體要求在加語言課程。比如學生報讀的是專科文憑課程(Diploma),簽證需要5.5分。

綜上所述,凡是跟學習和學歷有關的,都需要考A類雅思。跟移民局要求有關的,就可以選擇A類或者G類雅思。

Source: http://www.graceeducation.com.au/study_abroad_02.php?ANo=20

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James’ Tips

This week we take a look at a Writing Task 1 written by a Hong Kong working professional who is targeting a 7.0 yet unfortunately makes an all too common mistake. Can you spot this fatal mistake? Have a look at the attachment before reading the comments below:

✅❎ James’ comment on the student’s work:
Task Achievement adequate. Coherence and cohesion check.
Grammatical range conspicuously lacking.
“…and…” does NOT constitute a demonstration of a range of complex and sophisticated sentence structures, a red flag, used no less than 5 times; use in conjunction with, in tandem with, coupled with, not to mention, in addition to, as well as, etc, instead.
Grammatical accuracy is reasonably good.
There is at least one instance of solecism, or a broken illegible sentence, now corrected with proper complexity of range.
Some linking is used but could be improved. See amendments.
Some tense issues cause coherence issues.

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