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🔖 只靠 Paper Marking,IELTS Writing不出兩個月就達標了!

在十月分介紹了我們專攻 Writing 的 paper marking 服務。當中也提到很多的學生都非常感興趣,尤其是工作較忙碌的在職人士,他們特別贊同這個改卷的服務。同時也分享了一個學生她正正就是需要Writing的指導,她其他的 papers 都已經考得相當不錯,已在 Reading / Listening 同 Speaking 都達到8.5的分數,唯獨 Writing 又是上不到 7.0。

👍 繼上次十月的分享,學生 👩 Bonnie 她在八月份考得 IELTS 8.5/ 8.5/ 6.5/ 8.5(L/ R/ W/ S) 的成績,然後在九月就已經開始了在 Elite 的 paper marking 服務,很快就報考了十一月的 IELTS test。這裏我們也分享了Bonnie 的成績表,她在短短的時間裏輕輕鬆鬆地達標了!️🎉
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還記得前兩個星期我們的學生 Winnie 嗎?
👍 她前後不到一個月終於達標了,更向我們表示感謝!

早前我們分享了Winnie 的成績。話説她花了 20 堂去準備 IELTS 考試是爲了要達到 8777 (L/ R/ W/ S) #申請加拿大技術移民 的分數。雖然她不能一次達標,但已經有相當不錯的成績。再經過一段時間 #針對式 的練習,她輕輕鬆鬆地達到了目標,#Writing同Speaking 都有明顯的進步,Winnie 也非常感謝我們 #兩位皇牌的導師,還第一時間WhatsApp 通知我們 Elite。
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其實 IELTS 由 6.0 到 7.0 和 6.5 到 7.0 的分別不大,你們知道嗎?個案一分享!

剛在上一篇,我們提及到我們的學生 Winnie 雖然 Writing 還差 0.5 才達標但Reading, Listening達到滿分 9.0 和Speaking7.0 的她。爲何Writing還是一直卡住在 6.5 呢?上次也提到IELTS其實由 6.0 到 7.0 和 6.5 到 7.0 的分別不大,可是大部分他們都認爲 6.5到7.0 只不過是 0.5 之差,所以很多考生通常要達到 7分之前都會徘徊在 6.0 至 6.5分。在這可以分享我們曾經遇到的真實例子。

🔖 個案一:一名考 Academic paper 的學生他需要取得All band 7的成績,考過好幾次就唯獨只差 Writing 0.5的距離。然後他一次過book了一個月的考試,總共 4 次,一星期一次因爲 IELTS Academic 通常每個星期六進行,所以這個學生他相信總有一次會達到 Writing 7.0,最終他那拿著4張成績單發現其它的papers有 0.5 的 up & down 可是Writing完全是沒有變,依然停留在 6.5。但正正就是技巧的問題,最終都是要一定的training才能突破 6.5 的框框。
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📌 真實學生 : IELTS Writing 數堂就從 6.5 到 7.5 📈

我地既學生Rex本身英文不錯,他需要全7既成績去移民。每次上堂他都表演得很滿意亦經常當面稱贊James,落堂後他都會很高興地表示 James 幫了他很多,教了他很多!

IELTS 考試最大的困難都莫過於 Writing 同 Speaking, Rex只上了幾堂(5堂左右)私人班(每次一小時)就已經有很明顯的進步!但他想達到全8的成績,所以他會繼續努力, 再嘗試多幾次的課堂,待續…

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📘 James’ Tips

This week we take a look at the difference between a 7.0 and an 8.0 as we now have numerous students who need or are not satisfied with a 7.0

📚 The following essay was written by a working Hong Kong mom who already achieved a 7.0 in writing but is determined to rise to an 8.0

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EMBELLISHMENT.

Solid.
🔖 Just not amazing.

8.0 needs to be amazing. Top 1%.
You demonstrate some lexical flexibility, in tandem with near perfect natural syntax, see suggestions to make it more fluid. There is really only 1 grammatical error, a missing preposition, as well as only one instance of unnatural second language or beginner collocation: see suggestions. Salient complex conjunctions, sign posting linkers, or synonyms and examples of lexical resource, are noted.
🔖 However, not enough grammatical range is demonstrated, a fatal flaw, nor any scintillating lexis.
Good, not great. Close, but no cigar, no champagne.
Your best sentence was “considering that”. More like this will help.

Some suggestions are made to make the essay embellished and more refined as expected of the standard of an 8.0

Eg: “… when I will not only be able to settle the outstanding balance but further would be delighted to continue as your longstanding and grateful tenant.

I thank you in advance for your kind attention and further await your indulgence.
Cordially yours,”
Etc.

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IELTS電腦試�有什麽好處?

IELTS電腦試�有什麽好處?

自從8月開始,IDP跟British Council都先後開辦左computer-based test,以前會有些test-takers選擇考PTE因爲它是全電腦作答;尤其對於一些在職人士或工作對著電腦的人。但它唯一的分別就是Speaking依然是由Examiners進行考試,而PTE的Speaking不但是全電腦對答更是很多考生遇到最困難的一部分。
所以之前確實是很難取捨,但現在有了IELTS的電腦試同時不影響Speaking的難度,相對就容易得多。當然,也有人喜歡傳統的筆試,所以無論筆試或是電腦試都是按自己的喜好去安排就好了!

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【 James’ Tips🔑】

【 James’ Tips🔑】
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This week we have a look at probably the singular most common mistake in HK-Chinglish that basically all of the candidates who fall below a 7.0 invariably make.
The following essay was written by a working HK professional in the IT industry who is currently targeting a 7.0 yet consistently achieves only a band 6.0.
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✅❎James’ comment on the student’s work:
The most common mistake the candidate, like so many others, repeatedly makes, is incoherence due to confusing the singularity or plurality of subject verb, indicated repeatedly in the essay by an S unequal to a P for singular and plural dissonance.

Next the candidate makes parsing errors, confusing verbs with nouns and in the process likewise confusing prepositions, all now corrected.

Spelling errors are not tolerated at the 7.0 band level.

Lexical Resource is somewhat limited and while not an absolute disqualification, nonetheless the candidate could benefit by improving the lexical arsenal.

Some very serious errors of solecism, or flat out broken sentences, are noted, and corrected, indicating the candidate’s gaucherie or inability at handling more complex sentence structures.

While some complex sentences are evident, many of these are arbitrary and inept clearly evidence of the candidate’s attempt at complex sentences merely for the sake of it without clear understanding of the nuance and syntax of the English language.

Finally, some third person singular conjugation errors are noted.

A single instance of singular plural incoherence, or third person singular error, or parsing error, will immediately lower an otherwise acceptable 7.0 down to a 6.0 and
only IF the candidate has a preponderance of watertight complex sentences will it then be upgraded to a 6.5, but in any case, all singular plural incoherence, third person singular, parsing, or use of infinitives instead of proper conjugation and participle, as well as indefinite article singular usage versus plural, are game over headshots as far as a 7.0 is concerned.

This essay is consistent with a 6.0, despite the presence of a modicum of complex sentences, which are the only saving grace that did not render the essay a 5.5.

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‘I feel they are harassing me’, says a woman who took IELTS 21 times.��

‘I feel they are harassing me’, says a woman who took IELTS 21 times.��
Neha, a student from India has taken the IELTS test over 20 times, failing to get the desired 7 bands in writing each time even while she scored a near perfect score in the remaining modules.

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