【 James’ Tips🔑】

【 James’ Tips🔑】
This week we will look at an all too common HK-English mistake, that countless
upon countless students are still making, courtesy of the unqualified and fraudulent
teachers that the HK government bureau of education endorses in the DSE system.
This sample, and we are specifically looking at the conclusion paragraph, arguably the
most important paragraph in the essay, was written by a working professional who
like most Hong Kongers, imagines themselves to have near native proficiency or 7.0,
yet are duly humbled when they see the reality after numerous attempts at the exam,
and find they have only a 6.0, the global average for second language speakers.
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📝📝<<Student sample (as shown)>>
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✅❎James’ comment on the student’s work:
Although, no buts
But, no although.
Period, full stop.
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英國大學排名 2018

英國大學排名 2018
《泰晤士報(Times)》Good University Guide 英國大學排名同時採納學生滿意度、學術研究水平、入學門檻及畢業生就業情況等多方面去評價各所英國大學,能較全面地反映大學的教學和學術研究表現,因此我們亦一直主要採用 Good University Guide 作為挑選大學的數據參考。
Good University Guide 以中學畢業生為主要對象,在數據上亦以大學學位課程(Undergraduate)為本,以下我們簡單地歸納了排名背後的數據採納方法,以便學生和家長更深入了解大學排名的參考價值。詳情: http://bit.ly/UK_Uni_rank

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熱門國際英語考試比拼 PTE英語試考甚麼?

熱門國際英語考試比拼 PTE英語試考甚麼?

教育機構培生(Pearson)教育考試部引入英語考試PTE學術英語考試(PTE Academic),並正式登陸本港,可供報讀英、美、澳、加等逾萬所院校,申請移民澳洲更可獲加最多20分。
PTE學術英語考試屬3個PTE英語考試之一,該考試由2009年開始全球推行,本港2013年小規模展開,至今已有逾千人應考。考試考核學生聽、講、讀、寫能力,評分最低10分至最高90分,需時3小時,以電腦應考及評卷,四份試卷將綜合應考,有效期兩年。

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【 James’ Tips🔑】

【 James’ Tips🔑】
Today’s tip is on the importance of a strong conclusion.

The following is a typical example of a student whose IELTS target is 7.0 but unfortunately is still performing at 6.0 or less 👀.
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➡Topic Question:

Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared free.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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📝📝Candidate conclusion:

“In conclusion, the admission to access essential information should be open to the whole community, however, vital and dangerous one should be narrowly provided.”
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✅❎James’ comment on the student’s work:
Unnatural lexical item choice, “admission; narrowly provided”. “Community”?
Improper punctuation.
No demonstration of a range of complex sentence structures.
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📝📝The right way, using the same ideas:

“In conclusion, based on humanitarian grounds in order to save lives, vital medical technologies should be shared freely for the benefit of the whole world notwithstanding that any technologies that have a military application which may pose a lethal threat should be safeguarded given their potential for misuse.”
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If you merely do what everybody can do, you will get the mark that everybody can get.
If you want a higher mark that most people do not get, you have to do something better.
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✨【IELTS精讀課程】雙重優惠💥

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【 James’ Tips🔑】

【 James’ Tips🔑】
“How can I get a high band (7.0) in IELTS?”, many students ask.
Having a strong introductory paragraph is a good start.

🗣James’ comment on the student’s work:
– It is not necessary nor desirable in fact, to start every single Task 2 essay with “controversial / hot topic”. The phrase is hackneyed or has been used to death by all the candidates. Just don’t use it, if you want to sound different that is.
– Single plural incongruence right from the beginning is a nice head shot. The chances of surviving a head shot though not non-existent, remain slim.
– Lexical resources evident.
– Incorrect prepositional usage.
– Linking evident. Some linking arbitrary.
– Some collocation issues.
– Some range carelessness.
– “Tendencies / the tendency”. Lack of awareness regarding the indefinite article, the definite article, or plurality, remains the more persistent problem you are struggling with.
– Some good descriptives.
– Continue to bolster your lexical repertoire.
– Tighten up accuracy with grammatical range, as well as try extending it.

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