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How to write an IELTS Writing Task 2 Problem Solution Essay

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More vehicles on the roads these days. Most families now own more than one car
👉 The solution for problem 1
Better infrastructure. Car sharing schemes. Cycle lanes to encourage people to use bicycles instead of cars.

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Public transport is often inconvenient and overcrowded
👉 The solution for problem 2
More frequent and comfortable buses and trains would encourage people to use public transport.

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This week we will be looking at a Task 1, and one of the techniques that students may use to show analytical ability as well as ensure they have enough word count, which is fatal otherwise.
This essay was written by a HK DSE student targeting a 7.0, however, due to the preponderance of syntax errors, is at the moment still around a 6.0 bank.
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✅❎ James’ comment on the student’s work:
Third person singular errors, as highlighted in the essay, are damning around a 6.0
The candidate demonstrates some ability with a range of complex sentence structures, yet some gaucherie as well, thus nullifying somewhat the effect.
Spelling errors are not permitted at 7.0
Candidate makes the mistake of using HK’s favorite incorrect preposition “on”, corrected in the essay based on context.

✏ Singular plural incoherence is decisive in a 6.0 band, and no higher than 6.5 if there are few errors, which this essay is not the case.

Finally, in the conclusion, the candidate attempts to interpret the data, which, though not necessary, does present an opportunity to demonstrate skill and analytical ability if done so skillfully within the parameters of the topic. It is generally frowned upon to attempt to interpret the data which minimally requires that one report, not interpret, it.

However, there is something to be said of, nothing ventured, nothing gained, and what better way to stand out from the candidate pool than by astutely demonstrating incisive clarity, within reason. The key is to say, “the data suggests” rather than “I guess”, with the caveat of the limitations of the data. This candidate has done so, as appended.

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我們的學生 Janet 報讀了 20 堂的 IELTS 精讀課程。隨後再去考試,成績表一出就急不及待 WhatsApp 我們報了個喜訊,更表示比上次進步左好多,亦要求讓我們代她向導師傳遞謝意,謝謝他平時的訓練。以下是 Janet 的 IELTS 成績Before & After:

Listening : Before 6 👉 After : 6.5
Reading : Before 6 👉 After : 6.5
Writing : Before 5 👉 After : 6
Speaking : Before 6.5 👉 After : 7.5
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James’ Tips

This week we will be looking at a case study in Hong Kong English as opposed to proper English, revealing some of the many common mistakes that Hong Kong’s students are
unwittingly prone to.

The following sample was written by a Hong Kong working professional targeting a 7.0 for immigration purposes, yet due to many Hong Kong-English mistakes, remains at the
global average, 6.0
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📝📝<<Student sample (as shown)>>
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✅❎James’ comment on the student’s work:
His mistakes include, spelling, passive voice, parsing, third person singular errors, lack of appropriate prepositions, and most importantly, singular versus plural dissonance or
incoherence of subject verb conjugation, which is probably the number 1 most common HK-English mistake that students make landing them in the 6.0 band.
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