James’ Tips

This week we take a look at a sample by a student targeting a 7.0 who made some very common and costly mistakes.

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Can you spot the positive and negative objective marking criteria?

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  1. singular plural dissonance
  2. articles
  3. linkers
  4. punctuation
  5. arbitrary complex conjunction use
  6. parsing
  7. lack of range
  8. third person singular
  9. conjugation
  10. weak conclusion

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🔹 Comments 🔹

In addition to simply having too many mistakes, the conclusion in particular is rather weak given that is has no complexity whatsoever, which has been amerliorated.

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