This week we take a look at a sample by a student targeting a 7.0 who made some very common and costly mistakes.
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Can you spot the positive and negative objective marking criteria?
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- singular plural dissonance
- articles
- linkers
- punctuation
- arbitrary complex conjunction use
- parsing
- lack of range
- third person singular
- conjugation
- weak conclusion
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🔹 Comments 🔹
In addition to simply having too many mistakes, the conclusion in particular is rather weak given that is has no complexity whatsoever, which has been amerliorated.
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