James’ Tips

This week we take a look at a sample by a student targeting a 6.5-7.0 who, in addition to the more common errors, made a single all too common and costly mistake.

Can you spot the positive and negative objective marking criteria?
1. Indentation
2. repetition with conjunctions
3. solecism

🔹 Comments 🔹
Some grammatical complexity is evident albeit with some repetition, as well as at least one broken sentence. The common error in question is the writer forgot to indent his paragraphs, which can cost the writer at least 0.5 band. Don’t give the examiner any excuse to deduct marks. Such carelessness is lazy and easily avoided.
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