James’ Tips

This week we look at a sample by a DSE student targeting a 6.5.

Can you spot the positive and negative objective marking criteria?

1. Introduction, the most critical paragraph, has no range
   2. Examples belong in the body paragraphs
   3. Single plural incoherence issues
   4. collocation
   5. some range evident
   6. determiners
   7. inappropriate lexicons
   8. good use of sign post language demonstrating an orderly progression of ideas
   9. parsing issues
   10. punctuation issues

🖍 Comments

Candidate demonstrates a reasonable degree of a range of complex sentence structures, despite some spelling, punctuation, parsing and lexical errors. In addition to the quantity of errors, the introduction and the conclusion paragraphs do not demonstrate enough grammatical range.

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