🎉 James’ Tips

️This week we take a look at a very typical mistake far too many students attempting the exam in Hong Kong routinely make.

This sample was written by a HK working professional attempting to get an all 7.0, just like everybody else. Can you spot the mistakes:

🔖 Comments

  1. single plural incoherence
    2. determiners
    3. made up vocabulary
    4. spelling errors
    5. a critical lack of a range of complex sentence structures

📌 Observe, the Introduction, and Conclusion, the two most important parts of the essay, in the former, have only 2 complex conjunctions, adequately used, but not quite a 7.0, while the latter, has none.

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