This week we take a look at a more typical example of Hong Kong’s level of English which in fact is already considerably above the mean or local standard.
This essay was written by a HK working professional currently targeting a 7.0, which is rather superfluous to mention really, considering EVERYBODY is targeting all 7.0.
📌 Comments:
🔖 REASONABLE RANGE; INCOHERENCE OF PLURALITY; SOUND UNITY; COGENT ARGUMENTS
🔎 Task Achievement check.
🔎 Coherence and Cohesion check.
🔎 Grammatical range suspect and faulty.
🔎 Grammatical accuracy rather atrocious.
🔎 Lexical Resource displays some flexibility albeit jinxed.
Some words very accurate, others not.
🔎 Linking and signposting could be better.
💡 Generally, range is conspicuously lacking notwithstanding some choice lexis, which coupled with the preponderance of incoherence ultimately renders this a rather average performance of 6.0 even though in fact its lexical display is somewhat above average, say strong 6.5 or even 7.0
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