【 James’ Tips🔑】
This week we will look at an all too common HK-English mistake, that countless
upon countless students are still making, courtesy of the unqualified and fraudulent
teachers that the HK government bureau of education endorses in the DSE system.
This sample, and we are specifically looking at the conclusion paragraph, arguably the
most important paragraph in the essay, was written by a working professional who
like most Hong Kongers, imagines themselves to have near native proficiency or 7.0,
yet are duly humbled when they see the reality after numerous attempts at the exam,
and find they have only a 6.0, the global average for second language speakers.
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📝📝<<Student sample (as shown)>>
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✅❎James’ comment on the student’s work:
Although, no buts
But, no although.
Period, full stop.
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