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// James’ Tips //

This week we take a look at a more typical example of Hong Kong’s level of English which in fact is already considerably above the mean or local standard.

This essay was written by a HK working professional currently targeting a 7.0, which is rather superfluous to mention really, considering EVERYBODY is targeting all 7.0.

📌 Comments:

🔖 REASONABLE RANGE; INCOHERENCE OF PLURALITY; SOUND UNITY; COGENT ARGUMENTS

🔎 Task Achievement check.

🔎 Coherence and Cohesion check.

🔎 Grammatical range suspect and faulty.

🔎 Grammatical accuracy rather atrocious.

🔎 Lexical Resource displays some flexibility albeit jinxed.
Some words very accurate, others not.

🔎 Linking and signposting could be better.

💡 Generally, range is conspicuously lacking notwithstanding some choice lexis, which coupled with the preponderance of incoherence ultimately renders this a rather average performance of 6.0 even though in fact its lexical display is somewhat above average, say strong 6.5 or even 7.0

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🎄 // James’ Tips //

This week we take a look at a rather strong essay that is attempting a 7.0 which yet unfortunately persists in making one of the most common mistakes so many Hong Kong students are making that derails the attempt.

Can you spot the fatal error?

📌 Comments:

🔖 GENERAL GOOD EXAMPLE OF RANGE WITH UNFORTUNATELY TOO MANY INSTANCES OF SINGULAR PLURAL INCOHERENCE

Task Achievement sound.
Coherence and Cohesion adequate.
Grammatical range extensive. More has been supplemented, see suggestions.
Grammatical accuracy suspect.
Lexical resource displays some flexibility albeit with minor inconsistencies (admittedly, deserved).
Spelling is an issue; singular plural coherence issues persist; one sentence forgot a verb, a serious penalty.
Overall this is very near a 7.0; however, singular plural incoherence is a headshot rendering this most likely to be a 6.5 leaning slightly towards a 7.0 but not quite cigar.

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How to write an IELTS Writing Task 2 Problem Solution Essay

= = 🔖 Problem 1 – Causes 🔖 = =
More vehicles on the roads these days. Most families now own more than one car
👉 The solution for problem 1
Better infrastructure. Car sharing schemes. Cycle lanes to encourage people to use bicycles instead of cars.

= = 🔖 Problem 2 – Causes 🔖 = =
Public transport is often inconvenient and overcrowded
👉 The solution for problem 2
More frequent and comfortable buses and trains would encourage people to use public transport.

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📘 James’ Tips

This week we take a look at a Task 2 essay that arguably is a 7.0 depending on the examiner’s purview being stringent or lenient, as well as explaining objectively why, so as to increase student’s awareness to avoid making unnecessary mistakes.

Comments:

📚 THE DANGERS OF POOR TIME MANAGEMENT AND MENTAL EXHAUSTION AT THE FINISH

Task Achievement check.
Coherence and cohesion sound.

🔖 Pluses: preponderance of a range of complex sentence structures that are generally error free; some entire paragraphs have not a single error in them, a strong plus. Some lexical flexibility is amply demonstrated by sound paraphrasing. In general, few errors.

📌 Minuses: some over experimentation with lexis resulting in strange, awkward, “google-translate”-esque speak, now amended. Trouble with definite articles, as always. Don’t forget linkers, punctuation, every jot and tittle, ie, dot your iii’s and cross your ttt’s. Some mental exhaustion is apparent at the finish line of the conclusion with some otherwise avoidable mistakes. Some collocation and parsing issues. Don’t forget your singular or plural determiners, such as in the first sentence of the introduction, which ironically is also the most damaging mistake in the essay.😍

On the whole, there seem to be more good than bad things, which may serve to tip the scales, just barely.
Greater consistency in accuracy, would remove all doubt. Lexical flexibility is good, but don’t take an untested weapon to war.

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📚 你需要考哪一種雅思 IELTS?

雅思分為學術類(General Training 以下簡稱 G類)和培訓類(Academic 以下簡稱A類)兩種。那麼辦理那種到底要考那種簽證呢?

🇦🇺 澳洲移民局要求:申請移民需要考G類雅思。如果你是通過工程、IT等專業做獨立技術移民的話就可以考G類雅思4個7分或者4個6分。

🙋 那就會有很多學生會問:為什麼會計的學生申請獨立技術移民就需要考 A 類雅思4個7分呢?

在這裡解釋一下:🖍 會計學生之所以需要考A類雅思4個7分,並不是移民局的要求。而是會計職業評估機構CPA在做會計職業評估時需要雅思A類4個7分。

還有的學生會問:如果考A類雅思可不可以用來申請移民?答案是可以!A類雅思用於G類雅思用途,但是反過來G類雅思不可以用於A類雅思的用途。

而留學簽證則需要A類雅思。因為留學屬於培訓範圍,就必須要考培訓類雅思。根據現在的留學要求,學生只要考到A類雅思5分就可以拿到學生簽證。之後在根據課程的具體要求在加語言課程。比如學生報讀的是專科文憑課程(Diploma),簽證需要5.5分。

綜上所述,凡是跟學習和學歷有關的,都需要考A類雅思。跟移民局要求有關的,就可以選擇A類或者G類雅思。

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【 James’ Tips🔑】

【 James’ Tips🔑】
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This week we take a glance at a more common essay that so many HK students are struggling with, right at the 6.5 cusp but no cigar.

This is written by a HK working professional currently targeting a 7.0 yet at the moment still hovers between 6.0 and more often 6.5.

Can you spot the reasons why?

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📝📝<<Student sample (as shown)>>
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✅❎James’ comment on the student’s work:
Despite some evidence of complexity of sentence structure, much repetition persists, indicating some inflexibility and limitation of skill level.

Some lexical resource is evident, a plus.

More linkers could be effectively employed in order to raise coherence.

Numerous instances of solecism or broken sentences persist, indicated and remedied by a star with appropriate complex conjunction usage.

Ultimately the candidate makes too many mistakes as well as is too repetitious with sentence structure, in particular, “so that” ad nauseum. This is not only an all too common ‘conjunction’, technically a compound one, but is boring to tears after 5 uses.
Some tense issues, past tense instead of present tense, as well as the all too common HK-Chinglish habit of using present progressive in lieu of present proper.
Try to understand, only the top 5% of candidates world wide, that is 1 person in 20, gets a 7.0. Thus, if you talk like everyone else talks, not to mention make the same mistakes everyone makes, then why do you deserve a 7.0? To distinguish yourself in the eyes of the examiner, you need to employ more sophisticated complexity as well as lexis with few or better yet no errors. Common sentences get, guess what, a common result, and 6.5, is a common result, only a hair better than the global average for females of 6.0.
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<< Grammar: Capitalisation & Punctuations >>

<<Grammar: Capitalisation & Punctuations>>

Language makes it possible for us to communicate effectively but poor grammar can completely lose everything you are trying to say. Capitalization and marks of punctuation are one of the most important aspects of written English, but it’s often taken lightly.

This feature of writing not only gives meaning to the written words, it indicates pauses and changes in tones of the voice when speaking. A mistake in punctuation can express a completely different meaning to the one that is intended.

The most common punctuation marks in English: CAPITAL letters and full stops, questions marks, commas, colons and semicolons, exclamation marks and quotation marks.

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