除咗”I dont like it” 仲有咩表達方式去👎🏻呢?

除咗”I dont like it” 仲有咩表達方式去👎🏻呢?袋定多幾句落袋 多啲詞彙變化啦🧠

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【 James’ Tips🔑】

【 James’ Tips🔑】
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This week we have a look at probably the singular most common mistake in HK-Chinglish that basically all of the candidates who fall below a 7.0 invariably make.
The following essay was written by a working HK professional in the IT industry who is currently targeting a 7.0 yet consistently achieves only a band 6.0.
Observe.
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📝📝<<Student sample (as shown)>>
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✅❎James’ comment on the student’s work:
The most common mistake the candidate, like so many others, repeatedly makes, is incoherence due to confusing the singularity or plurality of subject verb, indicated repeatedly in the essay by an S unequal to a P for singular and plural dissonance.

Next the candidate makes parsing errors, confusing verbs with nouns and in the process likewise confusing prepositions, all now corrected.

Spelling errors are not tolerated at the 7.0 band level.

Lexical Resource is somewhat limited and while not an absolute disqualification, nonetheless the candidate could benefit by improving the lexical arsenal.

Some very serious errors of solecism, or flat out broken sentences, are noted, and corrected, indicating the candidate’s gaucherie or inability at handling more complex sentence structures.

While some complex sentences are evident, many of these are arbitrary and inept clearly evidence of the candidate’s attempt at complex sentences merely for the sake of it without clear understanding of the nuance and syntax of the English language.

Finally, some third person singular conjugation errors are noted.

A single instance of singular plural incoherence, or third person singular error, or parsing error, will immediately lower an otherwise acceptable 7.0 down to a 6.0 and
only IF the candidate has a preponderance of watertight complex sentences will it then be upgraded to a 6.5, but in any case, all singular plural incoherence, third person singular, parsing, or use of infinitives instead of proper conjugation and participle, as well as indefinite article singular usage versus plural, are game over headshots as far as a 7.0 is concerned.

This essay is consistent with a 6.0, despite the presence of a modicum of complex sentences, which are the only saving grace that did not render the essay a 5.5.

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‘I feel they are harassing me’, says a woman who took IELTS 21 times.��

‘I feel they are harassing me’, says a woman who took IELTS 21 times.��
Neha, a student from India has taken the IELTS test over 20 times, failing to get the desired 7 bands in writing each time even while she scored a near perfect score in the remaining modules.

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想學英文但又怕尷尬😳 想一對一針對自己個別嘅問題惡補👥想英文突飛猛進🚀
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<< Grammar: Capitalisation & Punctuations >>

<<Grammar: Capitalisation & Punctuations>>

Language makes it possible for us to communicate effectively but poor grammar can completely lose everything you are trying to say. Capitalization and marks of punctuation are one of the most important aspects of written English, but it’s often taken lightly.

This feature of writing not only gives meaning to the written words, it indicates pauses and changes in tones of the voice when speaking. A mistake in punctuation can express a completely different meaning to the one that is intended.

The most common punctuation marks in English: CAPITAL letters and full stops, questions marks, commas, colons and semicolons, exclamation marks and quotation marks.

Source: ielts.com.au

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【 James’ Tips🔑】

【 James’ Tips🔑】
This week we will take a look at a very typical example of a reasonably proficient second language English speaker who is also a Hong Kong working professional.
The candidate is targeting an 8.0 yet due to making some of the most common ‘HK-Eng’ mistakes, is therefore only a the global average for females level of 6.0 in writing.
Can you spot the most damaging mistake?
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📝📝<<Student sample (as shown)>>
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✅❎James’ comment on the student’s work:
The candidate’s task achievement, and coherence and cohesion, are sound.
A conspicuous lack of complex sentence structures is decisive in lowering the mark, which coupled with a patent lack of more sophisticated lexical items, results in the band’s foregone conclusion.
However, the worst and most common mistake the candidate has made, is the repeated incoherence of singular and plural conjugation between subject verb and object. This is even more damaging to the spelling errors, lack of sign posting through the use of discourse markers, inept use of prepositions, or unnatural and inappropriate lexical choices.
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【 James’ Tips🔑】
This week we take a look at a Writing Task 1 written by a Hong Kong working professional who is targeting a 7.0 yet unfortunately makes an all too common mistake. Can you spot this fatal mistake?
Have a look at the attachment before reading the comments below:
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📝📝<<Student sample (as shown)>>
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✅❎James’ comment on the student’s work:
Task Achievement adequate. Coherence and cohesion check.
Grammatical range conspicuously lacking.
“…and…” does NOT constitute a demonstration of a range of complex and sophisticated sentence structures, a red flag, used no less than 5 times; use in conjunction with, in tandem with, coupled with, not to mention, in addition to, as well as, etc, instead.
Grammatical accuracy is reasonably good.
There is at least one instance of solecism, or a broken illegible sentence, now corrected with proper complexity of range.
Some linking is used but could be improved. See amendments.
Some tense issues cause coherence issues.

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Melody學生分享嘅成功例子

學生Melody經過James一個課程既教導後,由之前IELTS屢次失敗,最終達到全7既成績去移民

全職媽媽既Melody她爲了兩個小朋友決定移民到澳洲。IELTS她需要每份paper最少達到7分既水平(全7)。其實她之前也考過亦清楚知道自己最大既問題就係Writing所以當她黎到我地centre時已經好清楚想瞭解如何提升Writing。

我們建議她可以上16堂既課程,畢竟她Writing比較弱。當時她有好多顧慮因爲家裏有兩個小朋友需要照顧,好難抽身。所以最終她決定自己再嘗試多一次但最後都需要回來求助。

她一黎到就立刻報名,連timetable都印定出黎,highlight好所有既堂。不出一個月完成16堂就馬上報考IELTS,雖然一次未能考到理想分數但也有明顯進步,再接再厲既她再補多幾堂,第二次也不負所望,成功通過更開心既係達到她可以同家人小朋友移民既心願!

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【 James’ Tips🔑】
This week we are delighted to ablate yet another instance of incorrigible HK-English, victim courtesy of the HK DSE education system.
The following essay was produced by a HK working professional targeting a 7.0 for immigration yet consistently hovering at best at 6.0. He has made the most common HK-English mistake with regards to prepositions, using the one “skeleton key” or master key preposition that HK second language speakers is a panacea for all
situations. It is not.
Do you know which preposition is the most commonly mistakenly used in HK?
It has been circled, 7 times in the essay.

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📝📝<<Student sample (as shown)>>
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✅❎James’ comment on the student’s work:
In addition to the aforementioned preposition error, the candidate makes a number of mistakes, parsing issues, confusing adverbs and adjectives, nouns and verbs, missing verbs, singular and plural incoherence or dissonance, absence of sign posting and discourse markers, inability to use auxiliary verbs correctly, starting sentences with “But” or “Yet”, gaucherie with the passive voice, and more subtle yet omnipresent, erroneous use of the present progressive tense in lieu of the present simple. Why do HK English second language speakers do this? Ask the DSE ‘teachers’.
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