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🎄 // James’ Tips //

This week we take a look at a rather strong essay that is attempting a 7.0 which yet unfortunately persists in making one of the most common mistakes so many Hong Kong students are making that derails the attempt.

Can you spot the fatal error?

📌 Comments:

🔖 GENERAL GOOD EXAMPLE OF RANGE WITH UNFORTUNATELY TOO MANY INSTANCES OF SINGULAR PLURAL INCOHERENCE

Task Achievement sound.
Coherence and Cohesion adequate.
Grammatical range extensive. More has been supplemented, see suggestions.
Grammatical accuracy suspect.
Lexical resource displays some flexibility albeit with minor inconsistencies (admittedly, deserved).
Spelling is an issue; singular plural coherence issues persist; one sentence forgot a verb, a serious penalty.
Overall this is very near a 7.0; however, singular plural incoherence is a headshot rendering this most likely to be a 6.5 leaning slightly towards a 7.0 but not quite cigar.

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📘 James’ Tips

This week we take a closer look at a strong candidate who is targeting a 7.0 and is very nearly there.

This sample was written by a DSE student. Can you notice how this writing compares with that of the average Hong Kong candidate?

📌 Comments:

🔖 ATTENTION TO DETAIL

The candidate demonstrates skill at a range of extended and complex sentence structures, with skilful usage of complex conjunctions and adequate signposting of discourse markers.

Piquantly, the candidate demonstrates considerable flexibility in lexical resource, with precise usage of more sophisticated and uncommon lexis.

Unfortunately the candidate also makes a few persistent errors, notably in parsing, preposition usage, and determiners.

Taken on the whole this essay is very near 7.0 to 7.5 yet has just enough errors to lower performance to the 7.0 and possibly 6.5 range.

😍 The margin, for error, decreases, the higher one goes.

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📘 James’ Tips

This week we take a look at an example with some strong positives to raise performance and achieve a 7.0, as well as some common mistakes that students too oft make in Hong Kong.

🔖 This essay was produced by a Hong Kong working professional working in one of the hospitals, who is currently targeting a 7.0.

Comments:

📍 THE IMPORTANCE OF A STRONG FINISH.

Task Achievement solid.
Coherence and cohesion ample.
Grammatical range evident yet with one significant error of a broken down sentence or instance of solecism.
Grammatical accuracy evidences persistent errors such as with passive voice, parsing or parts of speech, awkward prepositions, missing subjects, a very damaging error, and missing determiners or indefinite article, as well as overuse of the definite article, a minor error in terms of the detrimental impact on performance.
One hiccup with a complex sentence essentially derailed the attempt, as well as some collocation and parsing issues.
A strong plus, however, in the conclusion paragraph served to raise performance considerably, as the sample demonstrates as advised, a triple example of at least 3 complex conjunctions, and fortunately, with zero mistakes. If the paper had just a few less errors, this would definitely be a reliable 7.0

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IELTS 筆試 🤔 OR 電腦試 🤔?

今年8月開始,IELTS 既 Academic paper 同 General paper 都開辦左電腦試。Reading/Listening/ Writing 會係全電腦 💻 ,而 Speaking 依然係同 Examiners one-on-one既形式 🙂 。

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