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📌 JUPAS 派位未如理想?如何趕及2019年9月前往英國及澳紐升學?

由經驗豐富的升學專家分析英國及澳紐熱門大學、基礎課程及熱門學科的收生要求、課程特色、就業前景等,助您趕及於2019年開學。更分享英國大學聯招UCAS Clearing、選校及選科策略。
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🎉 James’ Tips ️

This week we will take a look at a very typical example of a reasonably proficient second language English speaker who is also a Hong Kong working professional.
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The candidate is targeting an 8.0 yet due to making some of the most common ‘HK-Eng’ mistakes, is therefore only a the global average for females level of 6.0 in writing.
Can you spot the most damaging mistake?
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✅❎ James’ comment on the student’s work:
The candidate’s task achievement, and coherence and cohesion, are sound.
A conspicuous lack of complex sentence structures is decisive in lowering the mark, which coupled with a patent lack of more sophisticated lexical items, results in the band’s foregone conclusion.
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However, the worst and most common mistake the candidate has made, is the repeated incoherence of singular and plural conjugation between subject verb and object. This is even more damaging to the spelling errors, lack of sign posting through the use of discourse markers, inept use of prepositions, or unnatural and inappropriate lexical choices.
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最近他考到很不錯的成績,只是跟他的目標還差一點點。由於 Speaking 只有 6.5 而其它的papers都達標,所以Bambi決定申請 Appeal,最後由 6.5 去到 7,完成了他 All band 7的移民夢。📈

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James’ Tips ️

“How can I get a high band (7.0) in IELTS?”, many students ask.
Having a strong introductory paragraph is a good start.

🗣 James’ comment on the student’s work:
– It is not necessary nor desirable in fact, to start every single Task 2 essay with “controversial / hot topic”. The phrase is hackneyed or has been used to death by all the candidates. Just don’t use it, if you want to sound different that is.
– Single plural incongruence right from the beginning is a nice head shot. The chances of surviving a head shot though not non-existent, remain slim.
– Lexical resources evident.
– Incorrect prepositional usage.
– Linking evident. Some linking arbitrary.
– Some collocation issues.
– Some range carelessness.
– “Tendencies / the tendency”. Lack of awareness regarding the indefinite article, the definite article, or plurality, remains the more persistent problem you are struggling with.
– Some good descriptives.
– Continue to bolster your lexical repertoire.
– Tighten up accuracy with grammatical range, as well as try extending it.

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📌 Sacred Heart College 紐西蘭中學

建於1903 年,是紐西蘭歷史最悠久的天主教男子中學。該校位於紐西蘭最大的城市 Auckland 市中心的東部海灣地區,毗鄰Mission Bay,St Heliers Bay 等著名的高尚住宅區,地理位置優越便利,環境也十分安全。
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學校代表/講者 : Ting XU, Director for International Students聯絡資料 : 學聯海外升學中心
面試日期 : 2019-06-24 星期一
面試時間 : 15:30 – 16:30
面試地點 : 學聯海外升學中心九龍尖沙咀梳士巴利道
3 號星光行 12 樓 1229-1230 室
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Source: www.hkosc.com.hk
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James’ Tips ️

This week we look at a sample by a Hong Kong working professional currently targeting an all 7.0.

Can you spot the positive and negative objective marking criteria?

  1. Chinglish
    2. prepositions
    3. determiners
    4. singular plural coherence
    5. spelling
    6. third person singular
    7. lexical accuracy
    8. more range
    9. parsing
    10. passive voice

📌 Comments 📌

Ideas trenchant, but no marks are awarded for good ideas; au contraire, it is the grammatical accuracy, grammatical range, and lexical sophistication, and precision, that renders the mark. Just too many errors, which can be overcome with adequate reading immersion and exposure coupled with writing practice.

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【 Elite 分 享 編 – 海外升學全攻略 】

📌 英澳紐美加 – 海外升學諮詢日

講座日期 : 2019-06-02 星期日

講座時間 : 14:00 – 17:30

講座地點 : 香港中央圖書館(1號活動室)
香港銅鑼灣高士威道66號
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Source: https://www.hkosc.com.hk
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🎉 James’ Tips ️

This week we will be looking at a Task 1, and one of the techniques that students may use to show analytical ability as well as ensure they have enough word count, which is fatal otherwise.
This essay was written by a HK DSE student targeting a 7.0, however, due to the preponderance of syntax errors, is at the moment still around a 6.0 bank.
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✅❎ James’ comment on the student’s work:
Third person singular errors, as highlighted in the essay, are damning around a 6.0
The candidate demonstrates some ability with a range of complex sentence structures, yet some gaucherie as well, thus nullifying somewhat the effect.
Spelling errors are not permitted at 7.0
Candidate makes the mistake of using HK’s favorite incorrect preposition “on”, corrected in the essay based on context.

✏ Singular plural incoherence is decisive in a 6.0 band, and no higher than 6.5 if there are few errors, which this essay is not the case.

Finally, in the conclusion, the candidate attempts to interpret the data, which, though not necessary, does present an opportunity to demonstrate skill and analytical ability if done so skillfully within the parameters of the topic. It is generally frowned upon to attempt to interpret the data which minimally requires that one report, not interpret, it.

However, there is something to be said of, nothing ventured, nothing gained, and what better way to stand out from the candidate pool than by astutely demonstrating incisive clarity, within reason. The key is to say, “the data suggests” rather than “I guess”, with the caveat of the limitations of the data. This candidate has done so, as appended.

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