📌 真實學生 : 最近 IELTS 取得超好成績的學生,仲要 Speaking 由當初 6.5 升到 8.5 📈

我地之前既學生 Rex 爲了移民,他最初只上了幾堂(5堂左右)私人班(每次一小時)就已經有很明顯的進步。他亦提到自己 Speaking 由 6.5 跳到 7.5。每次上堂他都表演得很滿意亦經常當面稱贊 James,最近他又再次突破了自己,9/ 8.5/ 7.5/ 8.5 (L/ R/ W/ S)。每次看到他的進步都真心替他開心。

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James’ Tips

This week we are delighted to ablate yet another instance of incorrigible HK-English, victim courtesy of the HK DSE education system.
The following essay was produced by a HK working professional targeting a 7.0 for immigration yet consistently hovering at best at 6.0. He has made the most common HK-English mistake with regards to prepositions, using the one “skeleton key” or master key preposition that HK second language speakers is a panacea for all
situations. It is not.

Do you know which preposition is the most commonly mistakenly used in HK?

It has been circled, 7 times in the essay.

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✅❎James’ comment on the student’s work:
In addition to the aforementioned preposition error, the candidate makes a number of mistakes, parsing issues, confusing adverbs and adjectives, nouns and verbs, missing verbs, singular and plural incoherence or dissonance, absence of sign posting and discourse markers, inability to use auxiliary verbs correctly, starting sentences with “But” or “Yet”, gaucherie with the passive voice, and more subtle yet omnipresent, erroneous use of the present progressive tense in lieu of the present simple. Why do HK English second language speakers do this? Ask the DSE ‘teachers’.
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 James’ Tips

This week we will look at an all too common HK-English mistake, that countless upon countless students are still making, courtesy of the unqualified and fraudulent
teachers that the HK government bureau of education endorses in the DSE system.

This sample, and we are specifically looking at the 釜conclusion paragraph, arguably the most important paragraph in the essay, was written by a working professional who like most Hong Kongers, imagines themselves to have near native proficiency or 7.0, yet are duly humbled when they see the reality after numerous attempts at the exam, and find they have only a 6.0, the global average for second language speakers.

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✅❎ James’ comment on the student’s work:
Although, no buts
But, no although.
Period, full stop.
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James’ Tips

This week we will be looking at a case study in Hong Kong English as opposed to proper English, revealing some of the many common mistakes that Hong Kong’s students are
unwittingly prone to.

The following sample was written by a Hong Kong working professional targeting a 7.0 for immigration purposes, yet due to many Hong Kong-English mistakes, remains at the
global average, 6.0
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📝📝<<Student sample (as shown)>>
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✅❎James’ comment on the student’s work:
His mistakes include, spelling, passive voice, parsing, third person singular errors, lack of appropriate prepositions, and most importantly, singular versus plural dissonance or
incoherence of subject verb conjugation, which is probably the number 1 most common HK-English mistake that students make landing them in the 6.0 band.
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【 Elite 分 享 編 】

究竟 British Council 同 IDP 報 IELTS 考試,哪一個比較好?

十多年來的經驗,我們真的被學生問過無數次“我應該去哪一間報考試?British Council 好 d 定係 IDP 好 d ?”

其實真的沒分別,無論 test papers / examiners / marking guidelines 都是統一的,詳細可以看看這裏
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⁉️ 但是……有幾點是需要注意:
✔️ 考試日期
✔️ 考試場地
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James’ Tips

Today’s lesson is on the necessity of avoiding fatal mistakes.

The following question and sample was submitted by a candidate who works in IT and needs all band 8.0. Therefore, the feedback given to this candidate who is taking only private lessons, is much more targeted and is needless to say, quite different from the feedback given to a student who would be targeting a 6.0, 6.5, or even a 7.0.

8.0 is the cream of the crop.
The candidate’s performance could have been an easy 7.5 except they made 2 fatal mistakes, which immediately would have made it as low as a 6.5 or even a 6.0. This inaccuracy was augmented with considerable complexity of sentence structure that was somewhat mitigating. Very common mistakes that virtually all of the candidates in Hong Kong make.

What fatal mistakes?
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➡Topic Question:
Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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✅❎James’ comment on the student’s work:
It is not helpful to open the essay with a simple sentence.
The introduction makes a damning mistake, and the result is thus sealed.
Better sign posting or linking has been supplemented which was lacking.
The conclusion has improved upon past performances yet still uses rather common complex sentences.
An alternative that leaves no doubt as to the caliber and band has been suggested for reference.
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Would you like to try?
Submit your task today for assessment. Must be submitted before the end of the day’s business hours.

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🔖 IELTS 考極都考不到,跟在香港考有關嗎?

又到左分享的時刻,大家都知道 IELTS test 是全球性的,不論你在哪裏考試只要你拿著它的證書都是世界認可!但相信有不少的你都聽過身邊的朋友爲了拿到目標分數花了不少金錢和時間;有些人更不惜飛去外地嘗試……原因一般都是聼誰呀誰呀的朋友說“。。。當然有些人成功有些人白白浪費了飛行的時間。其實我們一直以來接觸了無數的學生,也聽過他們的經驗,就在此分享一下。👍

️🎉 個案一:有個學生,她是護士,爲了移民一定要拿到Academic paper 的全7,在香港考了好幾次也是差一點點,所以她決定飛去臺灣試一試,碰碰運氣;但最終都是失敗了。

️🎉 個案二:就是最近的一個學生,他在香港考了一次但是還差一點點,二話不説就決定了去澳洲考第二次。這次他真的有一點點的進步,0.5分的提升。但原因是不是正正異地的分別?坦白說,只要你準備充足再加一點點的運氣,又碰到能讓你發揮的題目那就信心十足,考到好成績!不過在此分享多一點,在香港一般考 IELTS 都是在早上進行,直到大概中午。剛剛在澳州完成了 IELTS 的 Mr Sze 說他雖然只進步了0.5分但很感謝被安排了下午才考試,不用那麽趕!
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🔖 Elite 好消息分享,IELTS Appeal 成功例子!

我地有位同學仔申請 Appeal 成功啦!Bambi 一開始一心打算報幾堂就去考試,很明顯第一次的成績當然不太好。之後發現準備唔夠其後直接再報了最少堂數的課程。雖然他英文不算差但一般都知道IELTS也挺重視技巧,所以對於分數有要求的學生都明白碰運氣是不可靠。

最近他考到很不錯的成績,只是跟他的目標還差一點點。由於 Speaking 只有 6.5 而其它的papers都達標,所以Bambi決定申請 Appeal,最後由 6.5 去到 7,完成了他 All band 7的移民夢。📈

在這裏分享多少少… …Bambi 英文本身不錯所以他只報了最少課堂的課程,後來他心急要考到所以 Elite 針對了他的情況,給他一個最佳建議去安排上課。最後,他花了很短時間只上了 Writing 的小班加幾堂的單對單就考到理想成績。
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