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📌 Goldsmiths, University of London – 升學諮詢日

日期 : 2019年5月31日(星期五)
時間 : 4:00pm – 5:00pm
簡介 :
* 全球知名 University of London (倫敦大學) 成員
* 著名學科:

– 藝術及設計
– 媒體及傳播
– 音樂
– 心理學
– 社會學 / 人類學

Source: http://www.education.com.hk

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James’ Tips ️

This week we take a look at a Writing Task 2 written by a Hong Kong working professional targeting a 7.0. There are a number of issues in this sample, including a rather subtle but common issue with many HK students. See if you can spot it:

✅❎ James’ comment on the student’s work:

Task achievement check.

Coherence and cohesion adequate.

Examples and arguments sound.

Better paragraphing, or, more careful topic sentence forming, will help. It is not necessary to put examples in a topic sentence, but rather, to articulate the point, followed by in the next sentence, examples, illustrations, analogies, etc. Possibly, since the two examples seemed central, to have them each in their own paragraph, with a paraphrased – not repeated – topic sentence that echoes and supports the thesis.

More effort in paraphrasing will help give a good first impression to the examiner, which of course, requires

some lexical resource.
Spelling is essential at 7.0 and above.
A “time out”, is essentially, temporary prison for children, not exactly time away from the classroom, thus slightly awkward.

Some over use of “and” indicates lack of practice and flexibility with complex sentence structures not withstanding at least one solid instance of a complex sentence.
To make an argument, make an argument; not, maybe, make an argument.
Consider as a conclusion closing sentence, rather than “could, should, may, might”:

Demanding that children grow in knowledge and creativity while pigeonholing them is both an antithetical oxymoron, and worse, cruel and inhumane.

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🎉 James’ Tips ️

This week we take a look at a sample essay that is a mishmash of positives and negatives.

This sample was written by a HK working professional attempting to get an all 7.0, just like everybody else. Can you spot the mistakes:

📝 Comments

  1. single plural incoherence
    2. Hong Kong English awkward lexical choices
    3. Hong Kong Chinglish grammar, ie, Chinese grammar calqued to English
    4. parsing, parts of speech incoherent
    5. determiners
    6. numerous spelling errors

📘 Introduction has no thesis statement, a common mistake.
Considerable use of complex sentences coupled with discourse markers a decided plus;
Generally, the preponderance of persistent errors lowers the mark to no cigar.
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我地之前既學生 Rex 爲了移民,他最初只上了幾堂(5堂左右)私人班(每次一小時)就已經有很明顯的進步。他亦提到自己 Speaking 由 6.5 跳到 7.5。每次上堂他都表演得很滿意亦經常當面稱贊 James,最近他又再次突破了自己,9/ 8.5/ 7.5/ 8.5 (L/ R/ W/ S)。每次看到他的進步都真心替他開心。

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James’ Tips

This week we are delighted to ablate yet another instance of incorrigible HK-English, victim courtesy of the HK DSE education system.
The following essay was produced by a HK working professional targeting a 7.0 for immigration yet consistently hovering at best at 6.0. He has made the most common HK-English mistake with regards to prepositions, using the one “skeleton key” or master key preposition that HK second language speakers is a panacea for all
situations. It is not.

Do you know which preposition is the most commonly mistakenly used in HK?

It has been circled, 7 times in the essay.

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✅❎James’ comment on the student’s work:
In addition to the aforementioned preposition error, the candidate makes a number of mistakes, parsing issues, confusing adverbs and adjectives, nouns and verbs, missing verbs, singular and plural incoherence or dissonance, absence of sign posting and discourse markers, inability to use auxiliary verbs correctly, starting sentences with “But” or “Yet”, gaucherie with the passive voice, and more subtle yet omnipresent, erroneous use of the present progressive tense in lieu of the present simple. Why do HK English second language speakers do this? Ask the DSE ‘teachers’.
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 James’ Tips

This week we will look at an all too common HK-English mistake, that countless upon countless students are still making, courtesy of the unqualified and fraudulent
teachers that the HK government bureau of education endorses in the DSE system.

This sample, and we are specifically looking at the 釜conclusion paragraph, arguably the most important paragraph in the essay, was written by a working professional who like most Hong Kongers, imagines themselves to have near native proficiency or 7.0, yet are duly humbled when they see the reality after numerous attempts at the exam, and find they have only a 6.0, the global average for second language speakers.

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✅❎ James’ comment on the student’s work:
Although, no buts
But, no although.
Period, full stop.
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James’ Tips

This week we will be looking at a case study in Hong Kong English as opposed to proper English, revealing some of the many common mistakes that Hong Kong’s students are
unwittingly prone to.

The following sample was written by a Hong Kong working professional targeting a 7.0 for immigration purposes, yet due to many Hong Kong-English mistakes, remains at the
global average, 6.0
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📝📝<<Student sample (as shown)>>
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✅❎James’ comment on the student’s work:
His mistakes include, spelling, passive voice, parsing, third person singular errors, lack of appropriate prepositions, and most importantly, singular versus plural dissonance or
incoherence of subject verb conjugation, which is probably the number 1 most common HK-English mistake that students make landing them in the 6.0 band.
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