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IELTS grows to 3.5 million a year 📈

The internationalisation of higher education and an increasingly mobile international workforce migration continues to drive demand for IELTS – the world’s leading test of English for international migration and higher education. The number of IELTS tests grew to a record 3.5 million in 2018.
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🎉 James’ Tips ️

This week we will take a look at a very typical example of a reasonably proficient second language English speaker who is also a Hong Kong working professional.
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The candidate is targeting an 8.0 yet due to making some of the most common ‘HK-Eng’ mistakes, is therefore only a the global average for females level of 6.0 in writing.
Can you spot the most damaging mistake?
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✅❎ James’ comment on the student’s work:
The candidate’s task achievement, and coherence and cohesion, are sound.
A conspicuous lack of complex sentence structures is decisive in lowering the mark, which coupled with a patent lack of more sophisticated lexical items, results in the band’s foregone conclusion.
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However, the worst and most common mistake the candidate has made, is the repeated incoherence of singular and plural conjugation between subject verb and object. This is even more damaging to the spelling errors, lack of sign posting through the use of discourse markers, inept use of prepositions, or unnatural and inappropriate lexical choices.
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📌 美、加 🇺🇸 🇨🇦 升學 2019 專題講座

美國和加拿大的教育制度完善,著名院校眾多,而且升學途徑多元化,因此也成為了除英國和澳洲外,最受香港學生歡迎的留學地方。

是次講座中,Shorelight Education 和 Navitas 的代表會為各位家長和學生詳細講解美國和加拿大的大學學制、課程特色及熱門學科介紹,亦會分享如何透過大學銜接課程、社區學院課程升讀美加的著名大學。
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日期 : 2019年6月22日(星期六)
時間 : 2:00pm – 3:30pm
地點 : 香港教育資訊網 – 灣仔軒尼詩道 48-62 號上海實業大廈 901室
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James’ Tips ️

This week we look at a sample by a HK working professional currently targeting a 7.0.
📒 Can you spot the positive and negative objective marking criteria?
1. DO NOT FORGET THE REFERENCE
2. more linkers
3. singular plural incoherence
4. “and” does not qualify as range
5. more descriptives
6. syntax
7. missing “be” verbs
8. conjugation
9. definite article usage
10. prepositions
📘 Comments
Task Achievement is sound; coherence and cohesion lacking due to failure to reference. Some range is evident. More linkers and descriptives could raise performance. Failure to reference will incur a significant penalty, up to 2.0 TA penalty, per examiner prerogative. Spelling errors, singular plural incoherence, and conjugation errors are not tolerated at the 7.0 level. Finally, whereas task 1 is only 40% of the band, theoretically, in practice, it is 100% of the first impression which will influence interpretation of the task 2, and thus, should be done carefully.
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📌 Goldsmiths, University of London – 升學諮詢日

日期 : 2019年5月31日(星期五)
時間 : 4:00pm – 5:00pm
簡介 :
* 全球知名 University of London (倫敦大學) 成員
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– 藝術及設計
– 媒體及傳播
– 音樂
– 心理學
– 社會學 / 人類學

Source: http://www.education.com.hk

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James’ Tips ️

This week we take a look at a Writing Task 2 written by a Hong Kong working professional targeting a 7.0. There are a number of issues in this sample, including a rather subtle but common issue with many HK students. See if you can spot it:

✅❎ James’ comment on the student’s work:

Task achievement check.

Coherence and cohesion adequate.

Examples and arguments sound.

Better paragraphing, or, more careful topic sentence forming, will help. It is not necessary to put examples in a topic sentence, but rather, to articulate the point, followed by in the next sentence, examples, illustrations, analogies, etc. Possibly, since the two examples seemed central, to have them each in their own paragraph, with a paraphrased – not repeated – topic sentence that echoes and supports the thesis.

More effort in paraphrasing will help give a good first impression to the examiner, which of course, requires

some lexical resource.
Spelling is essential at 7.0 and above.
A “time out”, is essentially, temporary prison for children, not exactly time away from the classroom, thus slightly awkward.

Some over use of “and” indicates lack of practice and flexibility with complex sentence structures not withstanding at least one solid instance of a complex sentence.
To make an argument, make an argument; not, maybe, make an argument.
Consider as a conclusion closing sentence, rather than “could, should, may, might”:

Demanding that children grow in knowledge and creativity while pigeonholing them is both an antithetical oxymoron, and worse, cruel and inhumane.

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Computer-delivered IELTS embraced by test takers around the world

Test takers around the globe have welcomed the option of taking the world’s most trusted high-stakes language test on a computer.

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🎉 James’ Tips ️

This week we take a look at a sample essay that is a mishmash of positives and negatives.

This sample was written by a HK working professional attempting to get an all 7.0, just like everybody else. Can you spot the mistakes:

📝 Comments

  1. single plural incoherence
    2. Hong Kong English awkward lexical choices
    3. Hong Kong Chinglish grammar, ie, Chinese grammar calqued to English
    4. parsing, parts of speech incoherent
    5. determiners
    6. numerous spelling errors

📘 Introduction has no thesis statement, a common mistake.
Considerable use of complex sentences coupled with discourse markers a decided plus;
Generally, the preponderance of persistent errors lowers the mark to no cigar.
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