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This week we take a look at an example with some strong positives to raise performance and achieve a 7.0, as well as some common mistakes that students too oft make in Hong Kong.

🔖 This essay was produced by a Hong Kong working professional working in one of the hospitals, who is currently targeting a 7.0.

Comments:

📍 THE IMPORTANCE OF A STRONG FINISH.

Task Achievement solid.
Coherence and cohesion ample.
Grammatical range evident yet with one significant error of a broken down sentence or instance of solecism.
Grammatical accuracy evidences persistent errors such as with passive voice, parsing or parts of speech, awkward prepositions, missing subjects, a very damaging error, and missing determiners or indefinite article, as well as overuse of the definite article, a minor error in terms of the detrimental impact on performance.
One hiccup with a complex sentence essentially derailed the attempt, as well as some collocation and parsing issues.
A strong plus, however, in the conclusion paragraph served to raise performance considerably, as the sample demonstrates as advised, a triple example of at least 3 complex conjunctions, and fortunately, with zero mistakes. If the paper had just a few less errors, this would definitely be a reliable 7.0

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【不投資也可移民�️!雅思 #IELTS 如何輕輕鬆鬆幫到你】

【不投資也可移民�️!雅思 #IELTS 如何輕輕鬆鬆幫到你】

一、申請前先要看你的專業是否在移民清單Skilled Occupations List (#SOL)上�
SOL羅列所有澳洲本土有需求的專業,是規劃技術移民的指南。依據清單去了解具體職業和哪個專業相關、又有哪幾間大學開設這個課程、評估機構有何具體要求等。有需要亦可尋求要精通澳洲大學和移民政策的雙料專家的意見進行深度解讀。
在確定了你的專業在移民清單上之後就要看配額夠不夠,移民局對每個職業的配額都是不同的。澳洲實行Skill Select優選計劃,根據準則就申請者的各項條件進行評分,獲得移民分數越高,就越容易獲得政府邀請申請成為永久居民(PR)。

二、提交移民意願EOI
在優選政策(Skill Select)底下, 只要你的綜合實力達到一定要求,再提交你的移民意願EOI,就有機會獲得政府邀請。技術移民申請能否成功取決於你在績分測試(Points Test)中的得分,績分測試是根據你的技能和工作經驗評分,而在澳洲留學並不保證你能獲得澳洲移民,申請人很多時候需依靠其他方法以大幅提高你的績分並提高獲准機率。

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三、到底多少分才可以技術移民?
根據最新的EOI邀請表,只要綜合加分達到 #65分 就可以。

�提高英語能力: 英語良好(雅思四個7分)或優秀(雅思4個8分)的移民申請者可以獲得分別為 #10分#20分 的加分。
所以,如果你的雅思考到高分,不但可以幫助你在不足的地方加分還可以加快機會。

Source: AUstudylink

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【 James’ Tips🔑】

【 James’ Tips🔑】
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This week we take a glance at a more common essay that so many HK students are struggling with, right at the 6.5 cusp but no cigar.

This is written by a HK working professional currently targeting a 7.0 yet at the moment still hovers between 6.0 and more often 6.5.

Can you spot the reasons why?

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📝📝<<Student sample (as shown)>>
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✅❎James’ comment on the student’s work:
Despite some evidence of complexity of sentence structure, much repetition persists, indicating some inflexibility and limitation of skill level.

Some lexical resource is evident, a plus.

More linkers could be effectively employed in order to raise coherence.

Numerous instances of solecism or broken sentences persist, indicated and remedied by a star with appropriate complex conjunction usage.

Ultimately the candidate makes too many mistakes as well as is too repetitious with sentence structure, in particular, “so that” ad nauseum. This is not only an all too common ‘conjunction’, technically a compound one, but is boring to tears after 5 uses.
Some tense issues, past tense instead of present tense, as well as the all too common HK-Chinglish habit of using present progressive in lieu of present proper.
Try to understand, only the top 5% of candidates world wide, that is 1 person in 20, gets a 7.0. Thus, if you talk like everyone else talks, not to mention make the same mistakes everyone makes, then why do you deserve a 7.0? To distinguish yourself in the eyes of the examiner, you need to employ more sophisticated complexity as well as lexis with few or better yet no errors. Common sentences get, guess what, a common result, and 6.5, is a common result, only a hair better than the global average for females of 6.0.
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<< What makes Australia a top study destination for international students? >>

<< What makes Australia a top study destination for international students? >>

Australia’s university system is ranked in the top 10 in the world, with eight out of the top 100 universities ranked globally, making Australia a top choice for students wanting to study abroad.

With a strong economy and high standard of living, it’s not surprising that four of the world’s most livable cities are found in Australia, making it the third most popular international study destination in the world.

In 2015, more than 600,000 international students were enrolled in pre-tertiary, tertiary and vocational education in Australia.
Watch Australia Education: A Future Unlimited by Study in Austraila to discover more.

Source: ielts.com.au

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石籬天主教中學IELTS Summer Course -下集

石籬天主教中學IELTS Summer Course -下集
2018年IELTS暑期班@石籬天主教中學 (Shek Lei Catholic Secondary School)

今年暑假,👨‍🏫Elite被石籬天主教中學邀請前去教授IELTS,係中五班裏較Top15名既學生。當然我地好榮幸同期待今次既合作所以我地派了我地既資深導師James,他擁有超過十年的教學經驗更幫助了不少學生出國、移民!

過了兩星期既6堂課程,學生同老師都非常滿意今次既合作🤝,學生更大讚James既教學熱誠同專業👍。另外, Elite都要求學生做左個問卷希望下次有機會做得更好,但最意想不到既係大半既學生都表示願意過黎我地中心報讀IELTS課程📝。謝謝支持🙏!

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【 James’ Tips🔑】

【 James’ Tips🔑】
This week we will be looking at a Task 1, and one of the techniques that students may use to show analytical ability as well as ensure they have enough word count, which is fatal otherwise.
This essay was written by a HK DSE student targeting a 7.0, however, due to the preponderance of syntax errors, is at the moment still around a 6.0 bank.
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📝📝<<Student sample (as shown)>>
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✅❎James’ comment on the student’s work:
Third person singular errors, as highlighted in the essay, are damning around a 6.0
The candidate demonstrates some ability with a range of complex sentence structures, yet some gaucherie as well, thus nullifying somewhat the effect.
Spelling errors are not permitted at 7.0
Candidate makes the mistake of using HK’s favorite incorrect preposition “on”, corrected in the essay based on context.
Singular plural incoherence is decisive in a 6.0 band, and no higher than 6.5 if there are few errors, which this essay is not the case.
Finally, in the conclusion, the candidate attempts to interpret the data, which, though not necessary, does present an opportunity to demonstrate skill and analytical ability if done so skillfully within the parameters of the topic. It is generally frowned upon to attempt to interpret the data which minimally requires that one report, not interpret, it.
However, there is something to be said of, nothing ventured, nothing gained, and what better way to stand out from the candidate pool than by astutely demonstrating incisive clarity, within reason. The key is to say, “the data suggests” rather than “I guess”, with the caveat of the limitations of the data. This candidate has done so, as appended.
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學生的讚美,加上成績的見証,就是最好的實例

學生的讚美,加上成績的見証,就是最好的實例
—學生對導師的教學認同,更幫她在考試中大有進步!

我們這位學生是一位上班族💼,平時都非常之忙,沒太多的時間可以上課⏳。但要移民的她一定要達到聼講讀寫4個7的成績。她知道Writing和Speaking都不能單靠自己,所以選了一星期一堂的私人班👥,放工後就過來。經過幾堂的操練📝,她嘗試去考試,當然不能一次就立刻達到最理想的成績,但她已經有了明顯的進步!最重要是學生真心認同導師真的幫到她🤝!每次聽到學生拿到他們的成績很滿意既時候,就是我們教育的最大成就!

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