【 Elite 分 享 編 – 海外升學全攻略 】

📌 英澳紐美加 – 海外升學諮詢日

講座日期 : 2019-06-02 星期日

講座時間 : 14:00 – 17:30

講座地點 : 香港中央圖書館(1號活動室)
香港銅鑼灣高士威道66號
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How to write an IELTS Writing Task 2 Problem Solution Essay

= = 🔖 Problem 1 – Causes 🔖 = =
More vehicles on the roads these days. Most families now own more than one car
👉 The solution for problem 1
Better infrastructure. Car sharing schemes. Cycle lanes to encourage people to use bicycles instead of cars.

= = 🔖 Problem 2 – Causes 🔖 = =
Public transport is often inconvenient and overcrowded
👉 The solution for problem 2
More frequent and comfortable buses and trains would encourage people to use public transport.

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🎉 James’ Tips ️

This week we will be looking at a Task 1, and one of the techniques that students may use to show analytical ability as well as ensure they have enough word count, which is fatal otherwise.
This essay was written by a HK DSE student targeting a 7.0, however, due to the preponderance of syntax errors, is at the moment still around a 6.0 bank.
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✅❎ James’ comment on the student’s work:
Third person singular errors, as highlighted in the essay, are damning around a 6.0
The candidate demonstrates some ability with a range of complex sentence structures, yet some gaucherie as well, thus nullifying somewhat the effect.
Spelling errors are not permitted at 7.0
Candidate makes the mistake of using HK’s favorite incorrect preposition “on”, corrected in the essay based on context.

✏ Singular plural incoherence is decisive in a 6.0 band, and no higher than 6.5 if there are few errors, which this essay is not the case.

Finally, in the conclusion, the candidate attempts to interpret the data, which, though not necessary, does present an opportunity to demonstrate skill and analytical ability if done so skillfully within the parameters of the topic. It is generally frowned upon to attempt to interpret the data which minimally requires that one report, not interpret, it.

However, there is something to be said of, nothing ventured, nothing gained, and what better way to stand out from the candidate pool than by astutely demonstrating incisive clarity, within reason. The key is to say, “the data suggests” rather than “I guess”, with the caveat of the limitations of the data. This candidate has done so, as appended.

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 James’ Tips

This week we will look at an all too common HK-English mistake, that countless upon countless students are still making, courtesy of the unqualified and fraudulent
teachers that the HK government bureau of education endorses in the DSE system.

This sample, and we are specifically looking at the 釜conclusion paragraph, arguably the most important paragraph in the essay, was written by a working professional who like most Hong Kongers, imagines themselves to have near native proficiency or 7.0, yet are duly humbled when they see the reality after numerous attempts at the exam, and find they have only a 6.0, the global average for second language speakers.

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✅❎ James’ comment on the student’s work:
Although, no buts
But, no although.
Period, full stop.
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🔖 學生的讚美,加上成績的見証,就是最好的實例 —學生對導師的教學認同,更幫她在考試中大有進步!

我們這位學生平時都非常之忙,沒太多的時間可以上課。但她一定要達到聼講讀寫4個7的成績。她知道 Writing 和Speaking 都不能單靠自己,所以選了一星期一堂的私人班,一有時間就過來。經過幾堂的操練,她嘗試去考試,當然不能一次就立刻達到最理想的成績,但她已經有了明顯的進步!最重要是學生真心認同導師真的幫到她!每次聽到學生拿到他們的成績很滿意既時候,就是我們教育的最大成就!💕
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James’ Tips

Today’s tip is on the importance of maintaining coherence in the singularity or plurality of subject verb conjugation, probably the single most common mistake amongst second language English speakers in Hong Kong.
The following sample was written by a candidate whose target is 7.0 but is still getting a 6.0 or 6.5 at best due to these serious mistakes.

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📝📝<<Student sample (as shown)>>
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✅❎James’ comment on the student’s work:
Some range of complex sentence structures is evident
Some lexical resource is evident
Task achievement sound
Coherence and cohesion adequate
Grammatical accuracy generally communicable

📌 However:
Singular plural dissonance
Incorrect third person singular
Which constitute rather serious mistakes being that they are such basic grammar criteria.
Absence of indefinite article
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For example:
Children’s life? No. Children’s, plural, lives, plural.
Letting… leads to. (singular, singular)
Allowing… contributes to (singular, singular)
A helper or a grandparent… who does (singular, singular)
Singular or plural subject verb congruence is a basic requirement above 6.5.
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🔖 Elite 好消息分享,IELTS Appeal 成功例子!

我地有位同學仔申請 Appeal 成功啦!Bambi 一開始一心打算報幾堂就去考試,很明顯第一次的成績當然不太好。之後發現準備唔夠其後直接再報了最少堂數的課程。雖然他英文不算差但一般都知道IELTS也挺重視技巧,所以對於分數有要求的學生都明白碰運氣是不可靠。

最近他考到很不錯的成績,只是跟他的目標還差一點點。由於 Speaking 只有 6.5 而其它的papers都達標,所以Bambi決定申請 Appeal,最後由 6.5 去到 7,完成了他 All band 7的移民夢。📈

在這裏分享多少少… …Bambi 英文本身不錯所以他只報了最少課堂的課程,後來他心急要考到所以 Elite 針對了他的情況,給他一個最佳建議去安排上課。最後,他花了很短時間只上了 Writing 的小班加幾堂的單對單就考到理想成績。
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加拿大成 IELTS 考生熱門升學、就業及移民目的地 ✈

國際英語水平測試 (IELTS) 為 🐨澳洲、🇨🇦 加拿大及 🇨🇦 🇳🇿 新西蘭最常用的移民英語考試,可以助香港人一償前往加國工作或升學的願望。在加拿大,IELTS 是不少學府、專業組織及僱主的首選英語考試,獲當地逾 350 所機構接納及認可為升學或求職的英語能力證明。

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IELTS as the world’s leading test of English ️🎉

Global recognition is one of the reasons why the number of people taking IELTS continues to grow, with 2.9 million tests taken in 2016.

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