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This week we take a look at the difference between a 7.0 and an 8.0 as we now have numerous students who need or are not satisfied with a 7.0

📚 The following essay was written by a working Hong Kong mom who already achieved a 7.0 in writing but is determined to rise to an 8.0

Observe the comments:

EMBELLISHMENT.

Solid.
🔖 Just not amazing.

8.0 needs to be amazing. Top 1%.
You demonstrate some lexical flexibility, in tandem with near perfect natural syntax, see suggestions to make it more fluid. There is really only 1 grammatical error, a missing preposition, as well as only one instance of unnatural second language or beginner collocation: see suggestions. Salient complex conjunctions, sign posting linkers, or synonyms and examples of lexical resource, are noted.
🔖 However, not enough grammatical range is demonstrated, a fatal flaw, nor any scintillating lexis.
Good, not great. Close, but no cigar, no champagne.
Your best sentence was “considering that”. More like this will help.

Some suggestions are made to make the essay embellished and more refined as expected of the standard of an 8.0

Eg: “… when I will not only be able to settle the outstanding balance but further would be delighted to continue as your longstanding and grateful tenant.

I thank you in advance for your kind attention and further await your indulgence.
Cordially yours,”
Etc.

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📚 你需要考哪一種雅思 IELTS?

雅思分為學術類(General Training 以下簡稱 G類)和培訓類(Academic 以下簡稱A類)兩種。那麼辦理那種到底要考那種簽證呢?

🇦🇺 澳洲移民局要求:申請移民需要考G類雅思。如果你是通過工程、IT等專業做獨立技術移民的話就可以考G類雅思4個7分或者4個6分。

🙋 那就會有很多學生會問:為什麼會計的學生申請獨立技術移民就需要考 A 類雅思4個7分呢?

在這裡解釋一下:🖍 會計學生之所以需要考A類雅思4個7分,並不是移民局的要求。而是會計職業評估機構CPA在做會計職業評估時需要雅思A類4個7分。

還有的學生會問:如果考A類雅思可不可以用來申請移民?答案是可以!A類雅思用於G類雅思用途,但是反過來G類雅思不可以用於A類雅思的用途。

而留學簽證則需要A類雅思。因為留學屬於培訓範圍,就必須要考培訓類雅思。根據現在的留學要求,學生只要考到A類雅思5分就可以拿到學生簽證。之後在根據課程的具體要求在加語言課程。比如學生報讀的是專科文憑課程(Diploma),簽證需要5.5分。

綜上所述,凡是跟學習和學歷有關的,都需要考A類雅思。跟移民局要求有關的,就可以選擇A類或者G類雅思。

Source: http://www.graceeducation.com.au/study_abroad_02.php?ANo=20

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【不投資也可移民�️!雅思 #IELTS 如何輕輕鬆鬆幫到你】

【不投資也可移民�️!雅思 #IELTS 如何輕輕鬆鬆幫到你】

一、申請前先要看你的專業是否在移民清單Skilled Occupations List (#SOL)上�
SOL羅列所有澳洲本土有需求的專業,是規劃技術移民的指南。依據清單去了解具體職業和哪個專業相關、又有哪幾間大學開設這個課程、評估機構有何具體要求等。有需要亦可尋求要精通澳洲大學和移民政策的雙料專家的意見進行深度解讀。
在確定了你的專業在移民清單上之後就要看配額夠不夠,移民局對每個職業的配額都是不同的。澳洲實行Skill Select優選計劃,根據準則就申請者的各項條件進行評分,獲得移民分數越高,就越容易獲得政府邀請申請成為永久居民(PR)。

二、提交移民意願EOI
在優選政策(Skill Select)底下, 只要你的綜合實力達到一定要求,再提交你的移民意願EOI,就有機會獲得政府邀請。技術移民申請能否成功取決於你在績分測試(Points Test)中的得分,績分測試是根據你的技能和工作經驗評分,而在澳洲留學並不保證你能獲得澳洲移民,申請人很多時候需依靠其他方法以大幅提高你的績分並提高獲准機率。

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三、到底多少分才可以技術移民?
根據最新的EOI邀請表,只要綜合加分達到 #65分 就可以。

�提高英語能力: 英語良好(雅思四個7分)或優秀(雅思4個8分)的移民申請者可以獲得分別為 #10分#20分 的加分。
所以,如果你的雅思考到高分,不但可以幫助你在不足的地方加分還可以加快機會。

Source: AUstudylink

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<< What makes Australia a top study destination for international students? >>

<< What makes Australia a top study destination for international students? >>

Australia’s university system is ranked in the top 10 in the world, with eight out of the top 100 universities ranked globally, making Australia a top choice for students wanting to study abroad.

With a strong economy and high standard of living, it’s not surprising that four of the world’s most livable cities are found in Australia, making it the third most popular international study destination in the world.

In 2015, more than 600,000 international students were enrolled in pre-tertiary, tertiary and vocational education in Australia.
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