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【 James’ Tips🔑】

【 James’ Tips🔑】
This week we take a look at a Writing Task 2 written by a Hong Kong working professional targeting a 7.0. There are a number of issues in this sample, including a rather subtle but common issue with many HK students. See if you can spot it:
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📝📝<<Student sample (as shown)>>
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✅❎James’ comment on the student’s work:
Task achievement check.
Coherence and cohesion adequate.
Examples and arguments sound.
Better paragraphing, or, more careful topic sentence forming, will help. It is not necessary to put examples in a topic sentence, but rather, to articulate the point, followed by in the next sentence, examples, illustrations, analogies, etc. Possibly, since the two examples seemed central, to have them each in their own paragraph, with a paraphrased – not repeated – topic sentence that echoes and supports the thesis.
More effort in paraphrasing will help give a good first impression to the examiner, which of course, requires some lexical resource.
Spelling is essential at 7.0 and above.
A “time out”, is essentially, temporary prison for children, not exactly time away from the classroom, thus slightly awkward.
Some over use of “and” indicates lack of practice and flexibility with complex sentence structures not withstanding at least one solid instance of a complex sentence.
To make an argument, make an argument; not, maybe, make an argument.
Consider as a conclusion closing sentence, rather than “could, should, may, might”:
Demanding that children grow in knowledge and creativity while pigeonholing them is both an antithetical oxymoron, and worse, cruel and inhumane.

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石籬天主教中學IELTS Summer Course -下集

石籬天主教中學IELTS Summer Course -下集
2018年IELTS暑期班@石籬天主教中學 (Shek Lei Catholic Secondary School)

今年暑假,👨‍🏫Elite被石籬天主教中學邀請前去教授IELTS,係中五班裏較Top15名既學生。當然我地好榮幸同期待今次既合作所以我地派了我地既資深導師James,他擁有超過十年的教學經驗更幫助了不少學生出國、移民!

過了兩星期既6堂課程,學生同老師都非常滿意今次既合作🤝,學生更大讚James既教學熱誠同專業👍。另外, Elite都要求學生做左個問卷希望下次有機會做得更好,但最意想不到既係大半既學生都表示願意過黎我地中心報讀IELTS課程📝。謝謝支持🙏!

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【 James’ Tips🔑】

【 James’ Tips🔑】
This week we will be looking at a Task 1, and one of the techniques that students may use to show analytical ability as well as ensure they have enough word count, which is fatal otherwise.
This essay was written by a HK DSE student targeting a 7.0, however, due to the preponderance of syntax errors, is at the moment still around a 6.0 bank.
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📝📝<<Student sample (as shown)>>
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✅❎James’ comment on the student’s work:
Third person singular errors, as highlighted in the essay, are damning around a 6.0
The candidate demonstrates some ability with a range of complex sentence structures, yet some gaucherie as well, thus nullifying somewhat the effect.
Spelling errors are not permitted at 7.0
Candidate makes the mistake of using HK’s favorite incorrect preposition “on”, corrected in the essay based on context.
Singular plural incoherence is decisive in a 6.0 band, and no higher than 6.5 if there are few errors, which this essay is not the case.
Finally, in the conclusion, the candidate attempts to interpret the data, which, though not necessary, does present an opportunity to demonstrate skill and analytical ability if done so skillfully within the parameters of the topic. It is generally frowned upon to attempt to interpret the data which minimally requires that one report, not interpret, it.
However, there is something to be said of, nothing ventured, nothing gained, and what better way to stand out from the candidate pool than by astutely demonstrating incisive clarity, within reason. The key is to say, “the data suggests” rather than “I guess”, with the caveat of the limitations of the data. This candidate has done so, as appended.
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Melody學生分享嘅成功例子

學生Melody經過James一個課程既教導後,由之前IELTS屢次失敗,最終達到全7既成績去移民

全職媽媽既Melody她爲了兩個小朋友決定移民到澳洲。IELTS她需要每份paper最少達到7分既水平(全7)。其實她之前也考過亦清楚知道自己最大既問題就係Writing所以當她黎到我地centre時已經好清楚想瞭解如何提升Writing。

我們建議她可以上16堂既課程,畢竟她Writing比較弱。當時她有好多顧慮因爲家裏有兩個小朋友需要照顧,好難抽身。所以最終她決定自己再嘗試多一次但最後都需要回來求助。

她一黎到就立刻報名,連timetable都印定出黎,highlight好所有既堂。不出一個月完成16堂就馬上報考IELTS,雖然一次未能考到理想分數但也有明顯進步,再接再厲既她再補多幾堂,第二次也不負所望,成功通過更開心既係達到她可以同家人小朋友移民既心願!

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【 James’ Tips🔑】

【 James’ Tips🔑】
This week we are delighted to ablate yet another instance of incorrigible HK-English, victim courtesy of the HK DSE education system.
The following essay was produced by a HK working professional targeting a 7.0 for immigration yet consistently hovering at best at 6.0. He has made the most common HK-English mistake with regards to prepositions, using the one “skeleton key” or master key preposition that HK second language speakers is a panacea for all
situations. It is not.
Do you know which preposition is the most commonly mistakenly used in HK?
It has been circled, 7 times in the essay.

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📝📝<<Student sample (as shown)>>
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✅❎James’ comment on the student’s work:
In addition to the aforementioned preposition error, the candidate makes a number of mistakes, parsing issues, confusing adverbs and adjectives, nouns and verbs, missing verbs, singular and plural incoherence or dissonance, absence of sign posting and discourse markers, inability to use auxiliary verbs correctly, starting sentences with “But” or “Yet”, gaucherie with the passive voice, and more subtle yet omnipresent, erroneous use of the present progressive tense in lieu of the present simple. Why do HK English second language speakers do this? Ask the DSE ‘teachers’.
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英國大學排名 2018

英國大學排名 2018
《泰晤士報(Times)》Good University Guide 英國大學排名同時採納學生滿意度、學術研究水平、入學門檻及畢業生就業情況等多方面去評價各所英國大學,能較全面地反映大學的教學和學術研究表現,因此我們亦一直主要採用 Good University Guide 作為挑選大學的數據參考。
Good University Guide 以中學畢業生為主要對象,在數據上亦以大學學位課程(Undergraduate)為本,以下我們簡單地歸納了排名背後的數據採納方法,以便學生和家長更深入了解大學排名的參考價值。詳情: http://bit.ly/UK_Uni_rank

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【 James’ Tips🔑】

【 James’ Tips🔑】
Today’s lesson is on the necessity of avoiding fatal mistakes.

The following question and sample was submitted by a candidate who works in IT and needs all band 8.0. Therefore, the feedback given to this candidate who is taking only private lessons, is much more targeted and is needless to say, quite different from the feedback given to a student who would be targeting a 6.0, 6.5, or even a 7.0.

8.0 is the cream of the crop.

The candidate’s performance could have been an easy 7.5 except they made 2 fatal mistakes, which immediately would have made it as low as a 6.5 or even a 6.0. This inaccuracy was augmented with considerable complexity of sentence structure that was somewhat mitigating. Very common mistakes that virtually all of the candidates in Hong Kong make.

What fatal mistakes?

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➡Topic Question:

Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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✅❎James’ comment on the student’s work:
It is not helpful to open the essay with a simple sentence.
The introduction makes a damning mistake, and the result is thus sealed.
Better sign posting or linking has been supplemented which was lacking.
The conclusion has improved upon past performances yet still uses rather common complex sentences.
An alternative that leaves no doubt as to the caliber and band has been suggested for reference.

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