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🎉 James’ Tips ️

This week we take a look at a sample essay that is the quintessential stereotypical archetype of Hong Kong professionals attempting the IELTS exam targeting a 7.0

This sample was written by a HK working professional attempting to get an all 7.0, just like everybody else, and just like everybody else, makes in addition to a few smaller common mistakes, makes the one unforgivable mistake. Can you spot the mistakes:

🔖 Comments

  1. single plural incoherence
    2. reported speech / passive voice
    3. abbreviated colloquialisms
    4. missing prepositions
    5. HK-Chinglish grammar 📌
    6. spelling errors
    7. inability to handle the perfect tense
    8. limited lexical repertoire
    9. inadequate sign posting
    10. missing be verbs
    11. lack of range

In addition to the potpourri of grammatical gaucherie, notwithstanding the introduction paragraph suffices an adequate display of a grammatical range of complex sentence structures albeit the impact is mitigated for being so verbose, the conclusion paragraph is conspicuously salient in that it displays an abject lack of grammatical complexity. Specifically, the candidate errors in mistaking the use of “and; therefore; hence; thus; so” etc, in lieu of complexity proper.

Range or die.
Range or die.
No, really:
Range or die.
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🎉 James’ Tips ️

This week we take a look at a sample essay that is a mishmash of positives and negatives.

This sample was written by a HK working professional attempting to get an all 7.0, just like everybody else. Can you spot the mistakes:

📝 Comments

  1. single plural incoherence
    2. Hong Kong English awkward lexical choices
    3. Hong Kong Chinglish grammar, ie, Chinese grammar calqued to English
    4. parsing, parts of speech incoherent
    5. determiners
    6. numerous spelling errors

📘 Introduction has no thesis statement, a common mistake.
Considerable use of complex sentences coupled with discourse markers a decided plus;
Generally, the preponderance of persistent errors lowers the mark to no cigar.
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📌 真實學生 : 最近 IELTS 取得超好成績的學生,仲要 Speaking 由當初 6.5 升到 8.5 📈

我地之前既學生 Rex 爲了移民,他最初只上了幾堂(5堂左右)私人班(每次一小時)就已經有很明顯的進步。他亦提到自己 Speaking 由 6.5 跳到 7.5。每次上堂他都表演得很滿意亦經常當面稱贊 James,最近他又再次突破了自己,9/ 8.5/ 7.5/ 8.5 (L/ R/ W/ S)。每次看到他的進步都真心替他開心。

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🎉 James’ Tips

️This week we take a look at a very typical mistake far too many students attempting the exam in Hong Kong routinely make.

This sample was written by a HK working professional attempting to get an all 7.0, just like everybody else. Can you spot the mistakes:

🔖 Comments

  1. single plural incoherence
    2. determiners
    3. made up vocabulary
    4. spelling errors
    5. a critical lack of a range of complex sentence structures

📌 Observe, the Introduction, and Conclusion, the two most important parts of the essay, in the former, have only 2 complex conjunctions, adequately used, but not quite a 7.0, while the latter, has none.

Range or die.
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// 成 功 個 案 分 享 //

🔖 最近我們有收到學生對導師的感謝!

我們的學生 Janet 報讀了 20 堂的 IELTS 精讀課程。隨後再去考試,成績表一出就急不及待 WhatsApp 我們報了個喜訊,更表示比上次進步左好多,亦要求讓我們代她向導師傳遞謝意,謝謝他平時的訓練。以下是 Janet 的 IELTS 成績Before & After:

Listening : Before 6 👉 After : 6.5
Reading : Before 6 👉 After : 6.5
Writing : Before 5 👉 After : 6
Speaking : Before 6.5 👉 After : 7.5
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很明顯她每一份卷最少都有 1分 到 1分半 的上升📈 !👍
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James’ Tips

This week we take a look at a reasonably strong candidate who very nearly got a 7.0 in this Task 2 essay but made a very few, serious mistakes which very quickly foil the attempt.

This sample was written by a DSE student attempting to get an all 7.0, just like everybody else. Can you spot the critical mistakes:

📌 Comments

  1. single plural incoherence
    2. parsing, parts of speech incoherent
    3. some tense issues
    4. solecism, some complex sentences are broken
    5. No conclusion

📘 This essay has extensive use of complex sentences, linkers or sign post language as well as flexible descriptive lexis, however, the candidate begins to run out of time in the end, and suddenly starts making more mistakes, not using enough linkers, and ultimately runs out of time and omits the most important part of the essay, the conclusion. This is a classic case of a student who actually has a 7.0 level ability on a perfect performance, but due to poor time management, a problem some 80% of students suffer from, made just enough errors to lower the result.

Time is key.

No one kills time; Time kills every body.
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🔺 個 案 分 享 🔻

還記得我們的學生Winnie嗎 ?
她終於達標了 💪,更向我們表示感謝!

早前我們分享了 Winnie 的成績。話説她花了20堂去準備IELTS考試是爲了要達到全 7 的分數。雖然她不能一次達標,但已經有相當不錯的成績。再經過一段時間針對式的練習,她輕輕鬆鬆地達到了目標,Writing 同 Speaking 都有明顯的進步,Winnie 也非常感謝我們兩位皇牌的導師,還第一時間 WhatsApp 通知我們 Elite。
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