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講座日期 : 2019-06-02 星期日

講座時間 : 14:00 – 17:30

講座地點 : 香港中央圖書館(1號活動室)
香港銅鑼灣高士威道66號
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James’ Tips

This week we look at a sample by a DSE student targeting a 6.5.

Can you spot the positive and negative objective marking criteria?

  1. Introduction, the most critical paragraph, has no range
    2. Examples belong in the body paragraphs
    3. Single plural incoherence issues
    4. collocation
    5. some range evident
    6. determiners
    7. inappropriate lexicons
    8. good use of sign post language demonstrating an orderly progression of ideas
    9. parsing issues
    10. punctuation issues

🖍 Comments

Candidate demonstrates a reasonable degree of a range of complex sentence structures, despite some spelling, punctuation, parsing and lexical errors. In addition to the quantity of errors, the introduction and the conclusion paragraphs do not demonstrate enough grammatical range.

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Hedda 她係拿著已考既 IELTS 成績過來救助。其實她的Reading 同 Listening 已不錯,但最大既問題仍然係 Writing同 Speaking。太幸運她遇到我地既皇牌老師 James,上了一對
一既班就輕輕鬆鬆一次過達到最難既 Writing 同 Speaking 並各提升一分!
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🎉 James’ Tips ️

This week we take a look at a sample essay that is the quintessential stereotypical archetype of Hong Kong professionals attempting the IELTS exam targeting a 7.0

This sample was written by a HK working professional attempting to get an all 7.0, just like everybody else, and just like everybody else, makes in addition to a few smaller common mistakes, makes the one unforgivable mistake. Can you spot the mistakes:

🔖 Comments

  1. single plural incoherence
    2. reported speech / passive voice
    3. abbreviated colloquialisms
    4. missing prepositions
    5. HK-Chinglish grammar 📌
    6. spelling errors
    7. inability to handle the perfect tense
    8. limited lexical repertoire
    9. inadequate sign posting
    10. missing be verbs
    11. lack of range

In addition to the potpourri of grammatical gaucherie, notwithstanding the introduction paragraph suffices an adequate display of a grammatical range of complex sentence structures albeit the impact is mitigated for being so verbose, the conclusion paragraph is conspicuously salient in that it displays an abject lack of grammatical complexity. Specifically, the candidate errors in mistaking the use of “and; therefore; hence; thus; so” etc, in lieu of complexity proper.

Range or die.
Range or die.
No, really:
Range or die.
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🎉 James’ Tips ️

This week we take a look at a sample essay that is a mishmash of positives and negatives.

This sample was written by a HK working professional attempting to get an all 7.0, just like everybody else. Can you spot the mistakes:

📝 Comments

  1. single plural incoherence
    2. Hong Kong English awkward lexical choices
    3. Hong Kong Chinglish grammar, ie, Chinese grammar calqued to English
    4. parsing, parts of speech incoherent
    5. determiners
    6. numerous spelling errors

📘 Introduction has no thesis statement, a common mistake.
Considerable use of complex sentences coupled with discourse markers a decided plus;
Generally, the preponderance of persistent errors lowers the mark to no cigar.
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📌 真實學生 : 最近 IELTS 取得超好成績的學生,仲要 Speaking 由當初 6.5 升到 8.5 📈

我地之前既學生 Rex 爲了移民,他最初只上了幾堂(5堂左右)私人班(每次一小時)就已經有很明顯的進步。他亦提到自己 Speaking 由 6.5 跳到 7.5。每次上堂他都表演得很滿意亦經常當面稱贊 James,最近他又再次突破了自己,9/ 8.5/ 7.5/ 8.5 (L/ R/ W/ S)。每次看到他的進步都真心替他開心。

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🎉 James’ Tips

️This week we take a look at a very typical mistake far too many students attempting the exam in Hong Kong routinely make.

This sample was written by a HK working professional attempting to get an all 7.0, just like everybody else. Can you spot the mistakes:

🔖 Comments

  1. single plural incoherence
    2. determiners
    3. made up vocabulary
    4. spelling errors
    5. a critical lack of a range of complex sentence structures

📌 Observe, the Introduction, and Conclusion, the two most important parts of the essay, in the former, have only 2 complex conjunctions, adequately used, but not quite a 7.0, while the latter, has none.

Range or die.
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