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This week we take a look at a student who has already achieved a 7.0 but is struggling to raise performance higher to an 8.0, having not yet grasped and incorporated the necessary standard.

Comments:

🔖 LACK OF DETERMINERS, SINGULAR OR PLURAL AWARENESS, AND THE IMPORTANCE OF SOPHISTICATED LEXICAL ITEMS.

📌 Task Achievement check.

💡Coherence and cohesion sound.

Grammatical accuracy reasonable yet with some hiccups.
Grammatical range evident, though more is always better.
Lexical resource seems a bit lagging in effort or flexibility particularly initially albeit this is somewhat mitigated towards the end yet gives the impression of too little, too late.
Some fatal errors regarding the lack of awareness with the indefinite article, or determiners, singular or plural, see corrections.

📚 Too many small mistakes regarding singular or plural, indicating a lack of mature native grammatical awareness, coupled with overly simple words such as happiness.

Not only the higher one aims the smaller the margin of error, but also the greater the need to do something flamboyant and dashing, particularly above 7.5, which can be achieved either with winding and accurate complex sentences, precise circumlocution, or lexis that is both colourful as well as accurate: as Mark Twain said, “the difference between the right word and the almost right word is the difference between lightning and a lightning bug.”

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📘 James’ Tips

This week we take a look at a Task 2 essay that arguably is a 7.0 depending on the examiner’s purview being stringent or lenient, as well as explaining objectively why, so as to increase student’s awareness to avoid making unnecessary mistakes.

Comments:

📚 THE DANGERS OF POOR TIME MANAGEMENT AND MENTAL EXHAUSTION AT THE FINISH

Task Achievement check.
Coherence and cohesion sound.

🔖 Pluses: preponderance of a range of complex sentence structures that are generally error free; some entire paragraphs have not a single error in them, a strong plus. Some lexical flexibility is amply demonstrated by sound paraphrasing. In general, few errors.

📌 Minuses: some over experimentation with lexis resulting in strange, awkward, “google-translate”-esque speak, now amended. Trouble with definite articles, as always. Don’t forget linkers, punctuation, every jot and tittle, ie, dot your iii’s and cross your ttt’s. Some mental exhaustion is apparent at the finish line of the conclusion with some otherwise avoidable mistakes. Some collocation and parsing issues. Don’t forget your singular or plural determiners, such as in the first sentence of the introduction, which ironically is also the most damaging mistake in the essay.😍

On the whole, there seem to be more good than bad things, which may serve to tip the scales, just barely.
Greater consistency in accuracy, would remove all doubt. Lexical flexibility is good, but don’t take an untested weapon to war.

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📘 James’ Tips

“How can I get a high band (7.0) in IELTS?”, many students ask.

While there are four skills that are assessed, ask anyone who has taken the exam and you will learn that invariably, the most difficult skill assessed is, yes, writing. There are many techniques necessary to achieve this which would be outside the scope of a quick tip, yet as you know, a good start is not only have the task but is also absolutely vital, to giving the examiner a good first impression.

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【 James’ Tips🔑】

【 James’ Tips🔑】
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This week we take a look at a common and persistent problem so many students are encountering in their attempt at securing a band 7.0 in the IELTS exam.

This particular essay is by a strong candidate who very nearly has a 7.0 yet unfortunately for them still makes one very critical and unforgiving error.

Can you spot the problem?

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📝📝<<Student sample (as shown)>>
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✅❎James’ comment on the student’s work:
– Task Achievement solid.
– Coherence and cohesion apt.
– Grammatical range evident.
– Lexical resource demonstrates some flexibility.
– It is in the grammatical accuracy department where the candidate made only 2 fatal errors, but it must be understood that the higher the band the candidate targets, the smaller the margin of error.
– Coherence, of subject verb, in the singularity or plurality, is a must at the 7.0 and even a single instance of such a basic error, will lower a 7.0 down to a 6.5.
– No mistakes.

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IELTS電腦試�有什麽好處?

IELTS電腦試�有什麽好處?

自從8月開始,IDP跟British Council都先後開辦左computer-based test,以前會有些test-takers選擇考PTE因爲它是全電腦作答;尤其對於一些在職人士或工作對著電腦的人。但它唯一的分別就是Speaking依然是由Examiners進行考試,而PTE的Speaking不但是全電腦對答更是很多考生遇到最困難的一部分。
所以之前確實是很難取捨,但現在有了IELTS的電腦試同時不影響Speaking的難度,相對就容易得多。當然,也有人喜歡傳統的筆試,所以無論筆試或是電腦試都是按自己的喜好去安排就好了!

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IELTS 筆試 🤔 OR 電腦試 🤔?

IELTS 筆試 🤔 OR 電腦試 🤔?

今年8月開始,IELTS 既 Academic paper 同 General paper 都開辦左電腦試。Reading/Listening/ Writing 會係全電腦 💻 ,而 Speaking 依然係同 Examiners one-on-one既形式 🙂 。

想知更多電腦試既好處 可參考 👇
“9 Reasons why computer-based IELTS Test is a better
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<< 5 reasons to love Christmas in Australia >>

<< 5 reasons to love Christmas in Australia >>

Christmas movies, books and stories from our childhood have defined much of what we think of as a traditional Christmas. Most of the traditions we know and are familiar with have come from the Northern Hemisphere, where kids play with snow and families feast on turkey, warm puddings and fruitcake. Since Christmas happens during summer in Australia, we embrace the holiday season in blistering heat and get as far as we can get from long-established traditions. Let’s look at some of our favourite summer Christmas experiences.

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搵學校要面試 見工要面試 升職要面試

搵學校要面試 見工要面試 升職要面試
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石籬天主教中學IELTS Summer Course -下集

石籬天主教中學IELTS Summer Course -下集
2018年IELTS暑期班@石籬天主教中學 (Shek Lei Catholic Secondary School)

今年暑假,👨‍🏫Elite被石籬天主教中學邀請前去教授IELTS,係中五班裏較Top15名既學生。當然我地好榮幸同期待今次既合作所以我地派了我地既資深導師James,他擁有超過十年的教學經驗更幫助了不少學生出國、移民!

過了兩星期既6堂課程,學生同老師都非常滿意今次既合作🤝,學生更大讚James既教學熱誠同專業👍。另外, Elite都要求學生做左個問卷希望下次有機會做得更好,但最意想不到既係大半既學生都表示願意過黎我地中心報讀IELTS課程📝。謝謝支持🙏!

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