【 James’ Tips🔑】

【 James’ Tips🔑】
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This week we have a look at probably the singular most common mistake in HK-Chinglish that basically all of the candidates who fall below a 7.0 invariably make.
The following essay was written by a working HK professional in the IT industry who is currently targeting a 7.0 yet consistently achieves only a band 6.0.
Observe.
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📝📝<<Student sample (as shown)>>
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✅❎James’ comment on the student’s work:
The most common mistake the candidate, like so many others, repeatedly makes, is incoherence due to confusing the singularity or plurality of subject verb, indicated repeatedly in the essay by an S unequal to a P for singular and plural dissonance.

Next the candidate makes parsing errors, confusing verbs with nouns and in the process likewise confusing prepositions, all now corrected.

Spelling errors are not tolerated at the 7.0 band level.

Lexical Resource is somewhat limited and while not an absolute disqualification, nonetheless the candidate could benefit by improving the lexical arsenal.

Some very serious errors of solecism, or flat out broken sentences, are noted, and corrected, indicating the candidate’s gaucherie or inability at handling more complex sentence structures.

While some complex sentences are evident, many of these are arbitrary and inept clearly evidence of the candidate’s attempt at complex sentences merely for the sake of it without clear understanding of the nuance and syntax of the English language.

Finally, some third person singular conjugation errors are noted.

A single instance of singular plural incoherence, or third person singular error, or parsing error, will immediately lower an otherwise acceptable 7.0 down to a 6.0 and
only IF the candidate has a preponderance of watertight complex sentences will it then be upgraded to a 6.5, but in any case, all singular plural incoherence, third person singular, parsing, or use of infinitives instead of proper conjugation and participle, as well as indefinite article singular usage versus plural, are game over headshots as far as a 7.0 is concerned.

This essay is consistent with a 6.0, despite the presence of a modicum of complex sentences, which are the only saving grace that did not render the essay a 5.5.

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【 James’ Tips🔑】

【 James’ Tips🔑】
This week we take a look at a Writing Task 1 written by a Hong Kong working professional who is targeting a 7.0 yet unfortunately makes an all too common mistake. Can you spot this fatal mistake?
Have a look at the attachment before reading the comments below:
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📝📝<<Student sample (as shown)>>
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✅❎James’ comment on the student’s work:
Task Achievement adequate. Coherence and cohesion check.
Grammatical range conspicuously lacking.
“…and…” does NOT constitute a demonstration of a range of complex and sophisticated sentence structures, a red flag, used no less than 5 times; use in conjunction with, in tandem with, coupled with, not to mention, in addition to, as well as, etc, instead.
Grammatical accuracy is reasonably good.
There is at least one instance of solecism, or a broken illegible sentence, now corrected with proper complexity of range.
Some linking is used but could be improved. See amendments.
Some tense issues cause coherence issues.

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Hedda學生分享嘅成功例子

Hedda經James的教導下直接再考IELTS已進步神速,到第二次考更達到Writing同Speaking各提升了一分。

Hedda她係拿著已考既IELTS成績過來救助。其實她的Reading同Listening已不錯,但最大既問題仍然係Writing同Speaking。太幸運她遇到我地既皇牌老師James,上了一對
一既班就輕輕鬆鬆一次過達到最難既Writing同Speaking並各提升一分!

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【 James’ Tips🔑】

【 James’ Tips🔑】
This week we will look at an all too common HK-English mistake, that countless
upon countless students are still making, courtesy of the unqualified and fraudulent
teachers that the HK government bureau of education endorses in the DSE system.
This sample, and we are specifically looking at the conclusion paragraph, arguably the
most important paragraph in the essay, was written by a working professional who
like most Hong Kongers, imagines themselves to have near native proficiency or 7.0,
yet are duly humbled when they see the reality after numerous attempts at the exam,
and find they have only a 6.0, the global average for second language speakers.
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📝📝<<Student sample (as shown)>>
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✅❎James’ comment on the student’s work:
Although, no buts
But, no although.
Period, full stop.
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英國大學排名 2018

英國大學排名 2018
《泰晤士報(Times)》Good University Guide 英國大學排名同時採納學生滿意度、學術研究水平、入學門檻及畢業生就業情況等多方面去評價各所英國大學,能較全面地反映大學的教學和學術研究表現,因此我們亦一直主要採用 Good University Guide 作為挑選大學的數據參考。
Good University Guide 以中學畢業生為主要對象,在數據上亦以大學學位課程(Undergraduate)為本,以下我們簡單地歸納了排名背後的數據採納方法,以便學生和家長更深入了解大學排名的參考價值。詳情: http://bit.ly/UK_Uni_rank

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熱門國際英語考試比拼 PTE英語試考甚麼?

熱門國際英語考試比拼 PTE英語試考甚麼?

教育機構培生(Pearson)教育考試部引入英語考試PTE學術英語考試(PTE Academic),並正式登陸本港,可供報讀英、美、澳、加等逾萬所院校,申請移民澳洲更可獲加最多20分。
PTE學術英語考試屬3個PTE英語考試之一,該考試由2009年開始全球推行,本港2013年小規模展開,至今已有逾千人應考。考試考核學生聽、講、讀、寫能力,評分最低10分至最高90分,需時3小時,以電腦應考及評卷,四份試卷將綜合應考,有效期兩年。

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