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🔖 最近我們有收到學生對導師的感謝!

我們的學生 Janet 報讀了 20 堂的 IELTS 精讀課程。隨後再去考試,成績表一出就急不及待 WhatsApp 我們報了個喜訊,更表示比上次進步左好多,亦要求讓我們代她向導師傳遞謝意,謝謝他平時的訓練。以下是 Janet 的 IELTS 成績Before & After:

Listening : Before 6 👉 After : 6.5
Reading : Before 6 👉 After : 6.5
Writing : Before 5 👉 After : 6
Speaking : Before 6.5 👉 After : 7.5
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很明顯她每一份卷最少都有 1分 到 1分半 的上升📈 !👍
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真實學生 : IELTS Writing 數堂就從 6.5 到 7.5

我地既同學 Rex 本身英文不錯,他目標是要全 7既成績。每次上堂他都表演得很滿意亦經常當面稱贊James,落堂後他都會很高興地表示James幫了他很多,教了他很多!IELTS考試最大的困難都莫過於 Writing 同 Speaking, Rex 只上了幾堂(5堂左右)私人班(每次一小時)就已經有很明顯的進步!但他想達到全8的成績,所以他會繼續努力, 再嘗試多幾次的課堂!
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Elite 又一個學生 IELTS 達到 8 分的成功例子🤣

在幾個月前,我們的學生 Winnie 她考到了不錯的成績,她大概上了20堂後去考試。雖然Writing還差0.5才達標但Reading, Listening達到滿分9.0和 Speaking 7.0 的她已經相當不錯。根據老師的評語,我們這位學生其實也挺聰明只是她還是拿捏不到IELTS的Marking scheme標準,加上有些改不掉的Chinglish 壞習慣,而且一些 common mistakes還是太多,IELTS其實由6.0到7.0和6.5到7.0的分別不大,所以很多考生通常要達到7分之前都會徘徊在6.0至6.5分。當中他們大部分都認爲6.5到7.0只不過是0.5之差,所以他們會選擇不停的考相信總有一次會成功,但正正就是技巧的問題,最終都是要一定的training才能突破 6.5 的框框。
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James’ Tips

This week we will be looking at a case study in Hong Kong English as opposed to proper English, revealing some of the many common mistakes that Hong Kong’s students are
unwittingly prone to.

The following sample was written by a Hong Kong working professional targeting a 7.0 for immigration purposes, yet due to many Hong Kong-English mistakes, remains at the
global average, 6.0
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📝📝<<Student sample (as shown)>>
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✅❎James’ comment on the student’s work:
His mistakes include, spelling, passive voice, parsing, third person singular errors, lack of appropriate prepositions, and most importantly, singular versus plural dissonance or
incoherence of subject verb conjugation, which is probably the number 1 most common HK-English mistake that students make landing them in the 6.0 band.
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James’ Tips

Today’s lesson is on the necessity of avoiding fatal mistakes.

The following question and sample was submitted by a candidate who works in IT and needs all band 8.0. Therefore, the feedback given to this candidate who is taking only private lessons, is much more targeted and is needless to say, quite different from the feedback given to a student who would be targeting a 6.0, 6.5, or even a 7.0.

8.0 is the cream of the crop.
The candidate’s performance could have been an easy 7.5 except they made 2 fatal mistakes, which immediately would have made it as low as a 6.5 or even a 6.0. This inaccuracy was augmented with considerable complexity of sentence structure that was somewhat mitigating. Very common mistakes that virtually all of the candidates in Hong Kong make.

What fatal mistakes?
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➡Topic Question:
Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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✅❎James’ comment on the student’s work:
It is not helpful to open the essay with a simple sentence.
The introduction makes a damning mistake, and the result is thus sealed.
Better sign posting or linking has been supplemented which was lacking.
The conclusion has improved upon past performances yet still uses rather common complex sentences.
An alternative that leaves no doubt as to the caliber and band has been suggested for reference.
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Submit your task today for assessment. Must be submitted before the end of the day’s business hours.

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James’ Tips

Today’s tip is on the importance of clear paragraphing.

The following example is by a typical Hong Kong DSE student who is targeting a 6.5 and has at the moment only a 5.0 approximately skill level.

❓ Question:

Many parents feel that competition should be encouraged among children. Others believe that other skills or qualities are more advantageous.

Discuss both these views and provide your own opinion.

📌 Comments:
Parsing issues, ie, patient (adj.) or patience (n.)
Syntax and grammar issues.
Absence of linkers.
The essay is 1 giant block with no clear paragraphing.
The grammar has been corrected and linkers provided.

A better flow and progression of ideas, using only the same ideas in the essay, would have been:

💢 💢 Introduction 💢 💢
Paraphrase the topic; give a clear thesis statement.
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The benefits and drawbacks of competition.

️🎉Body 2:
Cooperation as a superior alternative.

Conclusion:
Reiterate why competition is not desired and why cooperation is a superior alternative.

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James’ Tips

This week we take a look at yet again, the most persistent HK-Chinglish errors that nearly all of the HK students are making in the IELTS exam. Although there are many mistakes in the following essay, all of which have been corrected, this analysis will focus on the most critical errors, or headshots, that even one of which will derail a 7.0 attempt.

This sample was written by a HK working professional attempting to get an all 7.0, just like everybody else, and just like everybody else, consistently still getting a 6.5. Can you spot the mistakes:

📌 Comments

☑️ 1. stronger paraphrase
☑️ 2. more LR (lexical resource)
☑️ 3. spelling errors
☑️ 4. some solecism
☑️ 5. more range
☑️ 6. singular plural incoherence, a fatal and careless mistake

Notwithstanding the candidate demonstrates above average lexical resource with some sophisticated complex sentence structures, adequate usage of discourse markers and clear progression of ideas, some careless and fatal mistakes are also made, including single plural incoherence, overuse of simple words, some broken sentences, lack of coherence or development of introduced Task Achievement topics, wrong use of pronouns mistakenly used as conjunctions which they are not, ultimately rendering the attempt a reasonably strong 6.5 but no cigar and no champagne.

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